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Old 09-06-2008, 06:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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W.I.P - TDX Pistol

For which Engine - N/A
Current Polycount - 1466
Max Polycount - I don't know... what should it be ?
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Description of background information on piece - i found a picture of it on deviant art and decided to do it for practice
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Hi guys, I'm currently working on a pistol for a three piece set i'm making.

here is the concept art for the gun, it was by Sharp n pointy from deviantart


Please Crit.

here are the renders





Update : 10/04/08



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Old 09-06-2008, 07:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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the silhouette or outline is looking quite similar so far, good job.

Some crits would be that the screw on the grip, i really doubt that would be sticking OUT, emboss that into the grip, or just texture it on later? Obviously the hammer isnt in yet... will look more like the concept once you stick that on. The place where the receiver meets the slide (the gap there) could be more defined, in the concept it looks a lot THICKer, maybe you could chamfer that gap a little? maybe that poly wastage, depending on what game you want to put this into (if any).

Keep going, add in those sights, hammer and the trigger!
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Old 09-07-2008, 08:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thnx man.. i'll go add those
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Old 09-08-2008, 11:45 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Looking good so far, you're sticking to the reference well. I know it's a WIP, but do you plan to add these parts?
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Also, I think the front part of the gun does need a bit going on, other than the plain cylinder. But other than that everything looks nice.

Just out of interest, silver or black?
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Old 09-08-2008, 04:29 PM   #5 (permalink)
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ya... i still have alot of polys left so i'll add those parts and possibly some accessories for it

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its going to be Black :-D its gonna be for a sniper kit... i might need help texturing it though, i havent textured in ages

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Old 10-04-2008, 12:05 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I just posted a small update.... finally... sorry guys
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