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Old 10-10-2006, 09:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Assault Rifle

I just started to make a fictive assault rifle. Ok its not just a Assault rifle, I am planing that it can be upgraded with bipod and a drummagazine (machine gun) or a scope and a small clip (sniper rifle) or a normal clip and rds (machine rifle)



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Edit: the parts after the rds-rail are just for imagination.

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Old 10-10-2006, 10:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Thats some nice progress, nothing sticks out too much and everything seems to fit. Have you got a concept sketch?
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Old 10-10-2006, 03:03 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yes, there is a concept sketch but it doesnt show more than the actual mesh.... I'll start drawing more later the night.
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Old 10-10-2006, 05:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Sounds like a good idea, altho most machine guns have the capability to have a drum magazine and longer/shorter magazines. I think you would be better off making actuall attachments to increase barrel size for sniper, and maybe shorten it for more maneuverabilty.

Now for the actual mesh, the things that I thought could be changed...as long as you didnt have some definite plan for them. Where you have that screen, that could possibly look a little cooler if you had it taper at the top, instead of it just be a rounded box. Hopefully that makes sense. Also, behind that screen thing, there is what looks like some sort of rail...that seem pointless to me, nothing would be mounted that low and up on top, I could understand if it was on the side for maybe a flashlight or laser, but theres really nothing that could be mounted up there.....that I know of. But like I said I dont know your concept so I could be talking out my butt here.

Just some ideas I had when I saw it. M0deling wise it looks good tho as far as I can see without a wire....could we see a wire? Oh yeah what poly count are you goin for?
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Old 10-14-2006, 11:57 AM   #5 (permalink)
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small update ! I am planning a polycount about <3500 triangles. Sry for the ugly wire :/. I am trying to optimize it/polycount.

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Old 10-14-2006, 12:35 PM   #6 (permalink)
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the rail system you made, isnt working, accesoires will fall off instantly :P

may I also suggest to atleast put a safety lever in?
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Old 10-14-2006, 12:38 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I was just about to do it :O !!




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Old 10-14-2006, 12:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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good


(stupid 10 character thingie..)
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Old 10-16-2006, 01:26 PM   #9 (permalink)
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mesh nearly final ... come on! I need crits :O!!!

Triangles : 3266 without deleting the unseen faces

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Old 10-16-2006, 01:29 PM   #10 (permalink)
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hmm, the rail system still isnt working :P
try moving the cocking handle higher, and more towards the magazine. Now its technically almost impossible or it work properly, since te hammer and trigger assembly are taking up the space there A mag release would be cool too

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