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Old 07-03-2008, 06:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Bruce Willis sculpt

Where are you looking to receive criticism - Proportions, anatomy, does the typical criteria of Bruce Willis seame probable to you?

I did not so much detail on this up to now, because I want to make sure that all of the basic proportions and Bruce Willis typical criteria are good!!

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Old 07-04-2008, 03:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I think it looks very much like him.
especially the mouth bit.
The neck seems a bit too big in my opinion
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Old 07-04-2008, 06:30 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hey Denispls.

Yepp, you are right. The neck is maybe a little too big. Thanks for the Feedback!!

Now I see that I posted the same Image twice ... I guess it was a little late, so I will fix that.

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Old 07-04-2008, 07:15 AM   #4 (permalink)
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You know what would really help?
get an image of bruce and rotate your model so it faces the same direction.

Maybe we can see some things that could use some improvement
(the latest die hard would probably have some good images)
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Old 07-04-2008, 11:03 AM   #5 (permalink)
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maybe add some eyes to aid in comparison too?

The mouth area seems pretty accurate to me, and that's one of the defining features of Bruce Willis if you ask me.
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Old 07-04-2008, 01:07 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hey Guys, thanks for your Feedback!

Dennispls: Yep I really should do that and I will. Have to check out first how to load a reference in ZBrush. I think that will help. I have to check out which img I´m going to use from that over 100 in my ref folder :P ...

brad-w: I think adding an eye would be helpful, you´re right man... sometimes people forget absolutely logical things during the work ....
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Old 07-04-2008, 03:08 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I held of commenting about this because something about it didn't sit right with me... and I wanted to pin down what. The profile looks spot on but the portrait looks shomehow off.

But after searching through several pics of Willis to compare it to, I still can't find what's wrong so I think it's really just me.

So, eh, good likeness, dude
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Old 07-06-2008, 08:42 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Hey Talon,

I know there is something that´s not correct, but I also have to figure out what it is exactly... I think it has something to do with the eyes adn/or the mouth. It maybe could be the lower lip which is a little to pregnant. I really should take 1 ref image (and not over 100 ) with which I work in ZBrush ...

anyway. Thanks for your reply ...
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Old 07-11-2008, 08:52 AM   #9 (permalink)
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update

Hey guys. here´s a quick update.

It´s still a WIP, so the detailing is not finished, but it would be very helpful to have some feedback. At the moment I´m working on the wrinkles and I find it really difficult to get them realistic !!









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Old 07-13-2008, 12:23 AM   #10 (permalink)
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you've very much so captured the likeness of him in those last few ones.
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