3D Scrapbook - Ibrahim - Page 2

illybang · 05-29-2008, 08:46 PM

like the improved changes man! your stuff is awesome.

just one thing, on the interactive kiosk, the screen doesn't really read as a screen to me. maybe you can add some scan lines or some more obvious signs of pixel-pitch. in motion, i can see it reading as a screen, but just a screen shot, it doesn't seem to portray it the best way. just my 2 cents.

doylle · 05-30-2008, 12:33 AM

I completely agree with illybang there. what have you done with that kiosk?!? It looks like you just slapped a random image on there, where did the high tech sci fi interface go?

Ibrahim · 05-30-2008, 09:30 AM

Ya after having looked at it the next day and with a fresh pair of eyes, I can see that I have made a bit of a mess of it.. hmm... anywa, I've done another user interface, and this time i've gone more for the sci-fi look, rather than a friendly interactive kiosk thing.

I think now, it looks more like some sort of helpful bot on a space station or something.

Ibrahim · 06-02-2008, 10:47 AM

Just did a quick game asset, spent like a couple of hours on both modelling and texturing.. Basically I'm creating some small props to fill up a small environment i'm working, will upload that soon.

madmenno · 06-04-2008, 11:09 AM

Realy nice work. The Royal Exchange is awesome.... I hope i can see a textured version of it some day. The game assets looking great as well, except the screen thing still does not look that convincing imo, but i won't have a clue how to fix it, maybe a little noise or as mentioned befor some scanlines may help. Did you do the fire extinguiser label yourself? In holland after "1. remove savety pin" theres a note about "2. aim at fire" lol i guess we are stupid here or maybe you should add it

.

Ibrahim · 06-04-2008, 03:58 PM

Thanks for the comments. I really don't know what else I can do the screen... meh.

as for the fire extinguisher, i think i got 2 and 3 mixed up... lol

Ibrahim · 06-12-2008, 08:56 PM

A new environment piece i'm working on at the moment. Just a simple corridor in an apartment building.

Still gotta model the low poly version of the doors, add a window at the end of the corridor, texture the lights, and other random decorations.

Would like some crits on the texturing.

Ibrahim · 06-15-2008, 07:11 AM

Updatos:

Few things I think I need to improve on is the control panal on the door, a bit too bright I think. Also still need to do the window, but after that I dunno what other assets to models. I do have ideas to create decals, like fire exit labels... other then that I'm dry on ideas, any suggestions?

Jimi · 06-15-2008, 08:08 AM

The bot looks nice.. The gui is nice too, but I've read that ideal gui for humans in computers would be round.. so I'm thinking this screen has definitely support for such a gui..

I think the corridor is missing some kind of bord to make the wall blend nicer to the floor, there could be a bord for ceiling too. Maybe some small doorsteps for the doors.

AlexanderSmith · 06-15-2008, 10:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jimi

The bot looks nice.. The gui is nice too, but I've read that ideal gui for humans in computers would be round.. so I'm thinking this screen has definitely support for such a gui..

I think the corridor is missing some kind of bord to make the wall blend nicer to the floor, there could be a bord for ceiling too. Maybe some small doorsteps for the doors.

Yes, definitely needs some base board. You're going to have to spice it up from standard BB though, the average household BB/CB is pretty boring.

05-29-2008, 08:46 PM	#11 (permalink)
illybang Amateur Artist 53 - 2	like the improved changes man! your stuff is awesome. just one thing, on the interactive kiosk, the screen doesn't really read as a screen to me. maybe you can add some scan lines or some more obvious signs of pixel-pitch. in motion, i can see it reading as a screen, but just a screen shot, it doesn't seem to portray it the best way. just my 2 cents. __________________ "A child of dust, to mother now return; For every seed must die before it grows. And though above the world may toil and turn, No prying spades will find you here below." Thrice - Child of Dust

05-30-2008, 12:33 AM	#12 (permalink)
doylle Game-Artist.net Admin 2,298 - 293	I completely agree with illybang there. what have you done with that kiosk?!? It looks like you just slapped a random image on there, where did the high tech sci fi interface go? __________________ Jeroenmaton.net - Scetchbook Thread - 3dsMax Viewport Shader - Ten Texturing Tips - Supports good crits -

06-15-2008, 08:08 AM	#19 (permalink)
Jimi Senior Artist 437 - 12	The bot looks nice.. The gui is nice too, but I've read that ideal gui for humans in computers would be round.. so I'm thinking this screen has definitely support for such a gui.. I think the corridor is missing some kind of bord to make the wall blend nicer to the floor, there could be a bord for ceiling too. Maybe some small doorsteps for the doors. __________________ My portfolio: http://koti.mbnet.fi/jeejeeje/portfolio/

Bookmarks
Digg	del.icio.us	StumbleUpon	Google

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

05-30-2008, 09:30 AM	#13 (permalink)
Ibrahim Artist 96 - 3	Ya after having looked at it the next day and with a fresh pair of eyes, I can see that I have made a bit of a mess of it.. hmm... anywa, I've done another user interface, and this time i've gone more for the sci-fi look, rather than a friendly interactive kiosk thing. I think now, it looks more like some sort of helpful bot on a space station or something.

06-02-2008, 10:47 AM	#14 (permalink)
Ibrahim Artist 96 - 3	Just did a quick game asset, spent like a couple of hours on both modelling and texturing.. Basically I'm creating some small props to fill up a small environment i'm working, will upload that soon.

06-04-2008, 11:09 AM	#15 (permalink)
madmenno New Artist 12 - 2	Realy nice work. The Royal Exchange is awesome.... I hope i can see a textured version of it some day. The game assets looking great as well, except the screen thing still does not look that convincing imo, but i won't have a clue how to fix it, maybe a little noise or as mentioned befor some scanlines may help. Did you do the fire extinguiser label yourself? In holland after "1. remove savety pin" theres a note about "2. aim at fire" lol i guess we are stupid here or maybe you should add it .

06-04-2008, 03:58 PM	#16 (permalink)
Ibrahim Artist 96 - 3	Thanks for the comments. I really don't know what else I can do the screen... meh. as for the fire extinguisher, i think i got 2 and 3 mixed up... lol

06-12-2008, 08:56 PM	#17 (permalink)
Ibrahim Artist 96 - 3	A new environment piece i'm working on at the moment. Just a simple corridor in an apartment building. Still gotta model the low poly version of the doors, add a window at the end of the corridor, texture the lights, and other random decorations. Would like some crits on the texturing.

06-15-2008, 07:11 AM	#18 (permalink)
Ibrahim Artist 96 - 3	Updatos: Few things I think I need to improve on is the control panal on the door, a bit too bright I think. Also still need to do the window, but after that I dunno what other assets to models. I do have ideas to create decals, like fire exit labels... other then that I'm dry on ideas, any suggestions?