Stairwell - Page 2

broli6000 · 09-16-2006, 11:11 AM

sorry the image refused to post!

here it is:

Again, this is not final, but i feel as though it is getting REALLY REALLY close

digitalwerk · 09-16-2006, 03:22 PM

1. make a better connection between the railing and the ground

2. same here, maybe a dirt decal on the ground

3. texture stretching!!! (very bad!!)

4. No connection between pipe and wall. Believe me, small details make it far better...

5. Is it a brick? If yes, why? I see no brick wall.

But for a start a nice composition. What engine is it, if its a engine?

broli6000 · 09-17-2006, 07:59 AM

i appreciate the help on all of this. Its no engine. Just a render in Lightwave. I am gettting this ready to put into my portfolio. I might try to put it into an engine later on down the road.

Oh well, i'll post some new progress soon!. Thanks all

Pankake · 09-17-2006, 10:01 AM

Why not enable global illumination and radiosity, then bake the lights to the object using the surface baker in surface editor>shaders, this will help the scene very much and still be game-ready.

broli6000 · 09-19-2006, 08:01 AM

oh ok i just remember when i did this test for EA, they had said no global illumination or radiosity. But i guess if it was baked, then we would be ok.

Yeah i'll have to try theat when i get the chance. Thanks!

09-16-2006, 03:22 PM	#12 (permalink)
digitalwerk Artist 52 - 3	1. make a better connection between the railing and the ground 2. same here, maybe a dirt decal on the ground 3. texture stretching!!! (very bad!!) 4. No connection between pipe and wall. Believe me, small details make it far better... 5. Is it a brick? If yes, why? I see no brick wall. But for a start a nice composition. What engine is it, if its a engine? __________________ -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

09-17-2006, 10:01 AM	#14 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Artist 874 - 95	Why not enable global illumination and radiosity, then bake the lights to the object using the surface baker in surface editor>shaders, this will help the scene very much and still be game-ready. __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Aaron Clifford portfolio

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09-16-2006, 11:11 AM	#11 (permalink)
broli6000 New Artist 12 - 0	sorry the image refused to post! here it is: Again, this is not final, but i feel as though it is getting REALLY REALLY close

09-17-2006, 07:59 AM	#13 (permalink)
broli6000 New Artist 12 - 0	i appreciate the help on all of this. Its no engine. Just a render in Lightwave. I am gettting this ready to put into my portfolio. I might try to put it into an engine later on down the road. Oh well, i'll post some new progress soon!. Thanks all

09-19-2006, 08:01 AM	#15 (permalink)
broli6000 New Artist 12 - 0	oh ok i just remember when i did this test for EA, they had said no global illumination or radiosity. But i guess if it was baked, then we would be ok. Yeah i'll have to try theat when i get the chance. Thanks!