Feng Zhu recreation

Jet Pilot · 08-02-2008, 08:14 PM

Almost done... but just wanted to know what you guys think.. looking for some C&C on the model where you think I need more detail. Tell me know

Later all

laughing_bun · 08-02-2008, 09:46 PM

looks pretty darn good to me. only thing that needs changing is the floor. To be it doesnt seem like a flat floor it looks like there are slight levels to itl See how the ground coming from door seems to drop off and is elevated. Whether that is what the concept is doing or not i think you should try it because the ground right now looks very un-interesting compared to the rest of the scene. Were feng zhu buddies im working on one of his pieces too! Looks good keep going!

andrei313 · 09-02-2008, 03:33 PM

Great work so far.
You could add some sort of elevator on the floor to make it more interesting. More detail will help there, just as laughing_bun suggested.
I guess you can add more detail to the door. I see some detail on the concept that you won't be able to fake using textures. I also notice that the pipes you did on the wall (lower part) don't fit that well with the high tech look of this. I would stay close to the concept on that, not a big thing but it looks out of place.
I hope you'll texture this

Looking forward to see more.

08-02-2008, 08:14 PM	#1 (permalink)
Jet Pilot New Member 34 - 21	Feng Zhu recreation Almost done... but just wanted to know what you guys think.. looking for some C&C on the model where you think I need more detail. Tell me know Later all __________________ Atomic Games http://www.SteveChelton.com

09-02-2008, 03:33 PM	#3 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,726 - 349	Great work so far. You could add some sort of elevator on the floor to make it more interesting. More detail will help there, just as laughing_bun suggested. I guess you can add more detail to the door. I see some detail on the concept that you won't be able to fake using textures. I also notice that the pipes you did on the wall (lower part) don't fit that well with the high tech look of this. I would stay close to the concept on that, not a big thing but it looks out of place. I hope you'll texture this Looking forward to see more. __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

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08-02-2008, 09:46 PM	#2 (permalink)
laughing_bun Senior Member 365 - 69	looks pretty darn good to me. only thing that needs changing is the floor. To be it doesnt seem like a flat floor it looks like there are slight levels to itl See how the ground coming from door seems to drop off and is elevated. Whether that is what the concept is doing or not i think you should try it because the ground right now looks very un-interesting compared to the rest of the scene. Were feng zhu buddies im working on one of his pieces too! Looks good keep going!