What are you working on? II - Page 84

Talon · 22-06-2008, 08:35 PM

Can you define creepy? I kinda like the eyes as they are, not sure what's wrong with them.

Ghostscape · 22-06-2008, 09:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Talon

Can you define creepy? I kinda like the eyes as they are, not sure what's wrong with them.

Her eyes are open really wide, and so she looks like she's either zoning out/having a scary flashback. It's a very small amount of adjustment that you need to make, but since eyes are so expressive it conveys a lot.

ae. · 23-06-2008, 02:42 AM

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Originally Posted by Ghostscape

Her eyes are open really wide, and so she looks like she's either zoning out/having a scary flashback. It's a very small amount of adjustment that you need to make, but since eyes are so expressive it conveys a lot.

thats what i meant

it really takes away from the whole piece i don't know why i might have an eye fetish.

urgaffel · 23-06-2008, 04:13 AM

Mode doodling:

Just trying out colours and highlights and stuff... will probably desaturate the highlights so they aren't so very very yellow... Ah well.

*EDIT*

I decided that red didn't look good so I made painted it black. Now to add cool bits and bobs to it

Thorjan · 23-06-2008, 05:34 AM

@Talon

I thought that her eyes where to close to each other , although it is hard to see in 3/4 view.
Also her eyes bend upwards towards the center which looks more european.

Hope it helps a bit

And is there a reason why you modeled the brows ? Just curious.

@urgaffel
That looks like a cool sdk , where can I get it ? EDIT: ah found it on polycount ^^

Talon · 23-06-2008, 05:39 AM

Ok, I'll try tweaking the eyes a bit.

They should be the right distance apart, but I think it's like Armanguy mentioned, they're quite wide open and that might be throwing that off.

The brows aren't modeled, it's just a normal map.

It's possibly just the shots, too. The wire shot shows it a bit more clearly.

Ironhawk · 23-06-2008, 12:57 PM

some prop / texture work for my scene.

Talon · 23-06-2008, 02:30 PM

Ok, you guys were right, I altered the eyes a little and it looks quite a bit more natural. Cheers

Such a small change, too, heh. Will post up some shots later on.

Filbot · 23-06-2008, 02:39 PM

Really nice looking AC unit Ironhawk

svothe · 25-06-2008, 11:01 AM

Well, im currently working on my first ever gun model, Apologies for my terrible 3d modelling

No texture yet >< But its my best work so far i think

22-06-2008, 08:35 PM	#831 (permalink)
Talon Industry Artist 3,798 - 1,359	Can you define creepy? I kinda like the eyes as they are, not sure what's wrong with them. __________________ > My Portfolio > Supporter of good crits.

23-06-2008, 04:13 AM	#834 (permalink)
urgaffel Administrator 681 - 174	Mode doodling: Just trying out colours and highlights and stuff... will probably desaturate the highlights so they aren't so very very yellow... Ah well. EDIT I decided that red didn't look good so I made painted it black. Now to add cool bits and bobs to it __________________ 2D shmup: Ultrablast! Games Industry/Game Art blog Last edited by urgaffel; 23-06-2008 at 06:11 AM.

23-06-2008, 05:34 AM	#835 (permalink)
Thorjan Frequenter 114 - 18	@Talon I thought that her eyes where to close to each other , although it is hard to see in 3/4 view. Also her eyes bend upwards towards the center which looks more european. Hope it helps a bit And is there a reason why you modeled the brows ? Just curious. @urgaffel That looks like a cool sdk , where can I get it ? EDIT: ah found it on polycount ^^ Last edited by Thorjan; 23-06-2008 at 05:36 AM.

23-06-2008, 05:39 AM	#836 (permalink)
Talon Industry Artist 3,798 - 1,359	Ok, I'll try tweaking the eyes a bit. They should be the right distance apart, but I think it's like Armanguy mentioned, they're quite wide open and that might be throwing that off. The brows aren't modeled, it's just a normal map. It's possibly just the shots, too. The wire shot shows it a bit more clearly. __________________ > My Portfolio > Supporter of good crits. Last edited by Talon; 23-06-2008 at 05:52 AM.

23-06-2008, 02:30 PM	#838 (permalink)
Talon Industry Artist 3,798 - 1,359	Ok, you guys were right, I altered the eyes a little and it looks quite a bit more natural. Cheers Such a small change, too, heh. Will post up some shots later on. __________________ > My Portfolio > Supporter of good crits.

23-06-2008, 12:57 PM	#837 (permalink)
Ironhawk Frequenter 108 - 3	some prop / texture work for my scene.

23-06-2008, 02:39 PM	#839 (permalink)
Filbot Amateur Artist 125 - 48	Really nice looking AC unit Ironhawk __________________ BLOG \| Supporter of Constructive Criticism

25-06-2008, 11:01 AM	#840 (permalink)
svothe Frequenter 93 - 5	Well, im currently working on my first ever gun model, Apologies for my terrible 3d modelling No texture yet >< But its my best work so far i think __________________

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