What are you working on? II - Page 22

veteehrri · 15-12-2007, 06:54 AM

hey bitmap, nice work, but as cigano said you could add a bit more dirt on.

bitmap · 15-12-2007, 08:02 AM

well. i could have add dirt and gooo and poo. but this isnt a bin for trash.
this is 1/3 of a set of bins used here in portugal dedicated to recycling. the yellow bin is used to store packages and paper. so there isnt any goo and slime going arround that.

Millenia · 16-12-2007, 05:31 AM

CaptainCock · 16-12-2007, 02:21 PM

wall I couldn't finish for the Contest :/ wish me luck next time....

Thujalvi · 16-12-2007, 02:51 PM

A lowpoly face I've spent the day working on. Based on the almighty polyregions.jpg with some modifications. I'd really appreciate the C&C as organic stuff is my weakpoint.

fabiodan · 16-12-2007, 04:38 PM

Nice go, bitmap.
pretty photorealistic, but i think you'll not want to go recycling for the next few days, you must be sick of that design. I am.

benclark · 16-12-2007, 05:14 PM

Thujalvi - the eye is looking very flat just now. Throw a sphere in to represent the eyeball and sculpt the eyelid points around the sphere

there is a a noticeable crease where the upper eyelid sits in the eye socket too that you dont have yet, I would suggest another loop around the eye to help with that

there are 3 loops tight together at the top of the nose, you could easily delete the middle or bottom one. That would give you better spacing and get rid of that triangle you have just now

Thujalvi · 21-12-2007, 08:10 PM

The basic shape of the head being now less or more done, another round of critiques would be in order. One point in particular would be best seen in the third render where the neck ends, I'm not too sure if the current solution is too good, so if anyone can come up with a better idea for it I certainly wouldn't mind. Usuals for C&C apply.

And thanks Alchemist for the crits.

1084 tris.

EDIT: Please do ignore the wideness (well the lack of it really) of the head, I've fixed that already.

CIgano · 21-12-2007, 08:31 PM

100 self illum diffuse glory.

Minotaur0 · 22-12-2007, 08:49 PM

THat looks awesome cigano

I was pretty bored tonight and decided to try some cave modeling on max... thanks hourences for the great tutorial

Now I need to figure out vertexpainting and add lots of details to it so I can have something good for my portfolio

15-12-2007, 06:54 AM	#211 (permalink)
veteehrri New Member 49 - 1	hey bitmap, nice work, but as cigano said you could add a bit more dirt on. __________________ Vitor Moura [<0>] http://veteehrri.wordpress.com

16-12-2007, 02:51 PM	#215 (permalink)
Thujalvi New Member 52 - 4	A lowpoly face I've spent the day working on. Based on the almighty polyregions.jpg with some modifications. I'd really appreciate the C&C as organic stuff is my weakpoint. __________________ Thujalvi

16-12-2007, 04:38 PM	#216 (permalink)
fabiodan Game Art Student 925 - 127	Nice go, bitmap. pretty photorealistic, but i think you'll not want to go recycling for the next few days, you must be sick of that design. I am. __________________

16-12-2007, 05:14 PM	#217 (permalink)
benclark Industry Artist 2,317 - 531	Thujalvi - the eye is looking very flat just now. Throw a sphere in to represent the eyeball and sculpt the eyelid points around the sphere there is a a noticeable crease where the upper eyelid sits in the eye socket too that you dont have yet, I would suggest another loop around the eye to help with that there are 3 loops tight together at the top of the nose, you could easily delete the middle or bottom one. That would give you better spacing and get rid of that triangle you have just now __________________ www.benjaminclark.net My Sketchbook Last edited by benclark; 16-12-2007 at 05:17 PM.

21-12-2007, 08:10 PM	#218 (permalink)
Thujalvi New Member 52 - 4	The basic shape of the head being now less or more done, another round of critiques would be in order. One point in particular would be best seen in the third render where the neck ends, I'm not too sure if the current solution is too good, so if anyone can come up with a better idea for it I certainly wouldn't mind. Usuals for C&C apply. And thanks Alchemist for the crits. 1084 tris. EDIT: Please do ignore the wideness (well the lack of it really) of the head, I've fixed that already. __________________ Thujalvi

15-12-2007, 08:02 AM	#212 (permalink)
bitmap Freelancer 138 - 19	well. i could have add dirt and gooo and poo. but this isnt a bin for trash. this is 1/3 of a set of bins used here in portugal dedicated to recycling. the yellow bin is used to store packages and paper. so there isnt any goo and slime going arround that.

16-12-2007, 05:31 AM	#213 (permalink)
Millenia Amateur Artist 245 - 15

16-12-2007, 02:21 PM	#214 (permalink)
CaptainCock Senior Member 230 - 22	wall I couldn't finish for the Contest :/ wish me luck next time....

21-12-2007, 08:31 PM	#219 (permalink)
CIgano New Member 34 - 5	100 self illum diffuse glory.

22-12-2007, 08:49 PM	#220 (permalink)
Minotaur0 Senior Member 206 - 45	THat looks awesome cigano I was pretty bored tonight and decided to try some cave modeling on max... thanks hourences for the great tutorial Now I need to figure out vertexpainting and add lots of details to it so I can have something good for my portfolio __________________ Thiago Klafke / Environment Artist Digital Portfolio

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