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Old 05-10-2009, 02:55 PM   #1901 (permalink)
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very shiny skin, looks like some kind of plastic. I don't know if that is what you are trying to achieve, a toy-look maybe, but it looks weird to me. I also think that the whole texture is "too little" defined, and there's some anatomy errors around the mouth area. Doesn't seems to fit the rest of his face.

I like the shape of the nose and how it integrates with the eyes btw, but looks like you still have a long road to run on this one.
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Old 05-10-2009, 03:48 PM   #1902 (permalink)
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Quickly becoming my 3D plaything everytime I can't be bothered doing any proper work :P

I'm getting a tattoo similar to this on my forearm

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Old 06-10-2009, 05:57 AM   #1903 (permalink)
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onionhead_o: That's looking promising but I think you could really push the lighting some more. Right now it's very evenly lit across the entire room and there's very little contrast or focus. Some brighter lights and more contrast in the scene would help it pop a load more. It'd be nice to see some light sources, too.
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Old 06-10-2009, 07:24 AM   #1904 (permalink)
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I'm working through the weapon creation tutorial I found on these very forums. Highly informative for the beginner

Just got done with the high poly

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Old 06-10-2009, 07:41 AM   #1905 (permalink)
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Looking pretty solid.

I'd maybe tighten up the bevel on the end of the magazine and I'm not sure if it's just the viewport but there looks to be some pretty odd shading on the sight thing at the top.
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Old 06-10-2009, 12:52 PM   #1906 (permalink)
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very shiny skin, looks like some kind of plastic. I don't know if that is what you are trying to achieve, a toy-look maybe, but it looks weird to me. I also think that the whole texture is "too little" defined, and there's some anatomy errors around the mouth area. Doesn't seems to fit the rest of his face.

I like the shape of the nose and how it integrates with the eyes btw, but looks like you still have a long road to run on this one.
Sculpting the mouth is really hard for me, do u know some tutorials? For Zbrush or Mudbox.
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Old 06-10-2009, 02:29 PM   #1907 (permalink)
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Sculpting the mouth is really hard for me, do u know some tutorials? For Zbrush or Mudbox.
sure, here it goes:

mouth modelling timelapse

It's not exactly a tutorial, it's a timelapse showing how to model a mouth.

You could also have a look here.

You can find a lot of videos like that on youtube, some better than others, but still very usefull if you just started sculpting on zbrush.

Remember that's is crucial to have anatomy knowledge before drawing/modeling cartoonish characters.

And good luck
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Still working on the axe from the Guild Wars weapon competition last year, Minze's entry. Deviated slightly for my own tastes but yeah. See how Oblivion likes it when I do a low and such ...


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Old 10-10-2009, 07:34 AM   #1910 (permalink)
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@ onionhead_o; Its a little dark, isn't it?
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