Male Anatomy - Please Crit - Page 2

Pankake · 08-22-2006, 12:31 PM

The polygon flow is good for low poly work like this, his neck is looking a little large atm, he's very well built :P, good work so far.

phantom · 08-22-2006, 02:18 PM

Great flow so far, Ben.

Nice work.

benclark · 08-22-2006, 04:40 PM

Hi

Added a head and spent some time tweaking the neck and arms. He currently stands at 2295 tris without eyes or hands.

I'm hoping to finish this tomorow night and then rig it to test the geometry

ragupasta · 08-22-2006, 06:10 PM

Hey looking real clean. Only crit I can spot is that the scale looks a little off, ( could be the shot ), but he looks a little squashed. Head and body look fine, I think it's the short legs and large thighs, the fall-off is too great.
Still looks really good, and really clean.
I also like the way you've twisted the forarms to try and keep the muscle flow. I dont see many people use that method.
Keep it up!!

Edit: *forearms*

benclark · 08-23-2006, 02:58 AM

yeah I noticed that after I posted the pic. I think I may have forgotten to set the focal length on the render camera

benclark · 08-23-2006, 02:20 PM

final model. 3316 tris

benclark · 08-24-2006, 12:57 PM

rigged to test the geometry.

Hips are a bit shakey but I'm pretty happy with the deformations overall

requiem2d · 08-24-2006, 01:36 PM

LOL, I love it

Good job !

Xadeko · 08-25-2006, 05:24 AM

that deforms realy good!

specialy love the 2nd render

Pankake · 08-25-2006, 08:06 AM

Yay, ballet! xD.

08-22-2006, 12:31 PM	#11 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Artist 867 - 94	The polygon flow is good for low poly work like this, his neck is looking a little large atm, he's very well built :P, good work so far. __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Aaron Clifford portfolio

08-24-2006, 01:36 PM	#18 (permalink)
requiem2d Game-Artist.Net Founder 2,208 - 309	LOL, I love it Good job ! __________________

08-25-2006, 08:06 AM	#20 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Artist 867 - 94	Yay, ballet! xD. __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Aaron Clifford portfolio

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08-22-2006, 02:18 PM	#12 (permalink)
phantom Artist 67 - 2	Great flow so far, Ben. Nice work.

08-22-2006, 04:40 PM	#13 (permalink)
benclark Game-Artist.net Staff 2,013 - 290	Hi Added a head and spent some time tweaking the neck and arms. He currently stands at 2295 tris without eyes or hands. I'm hoping to finish this tomorow night and then rig it to test the geometry

08-22-2006, 06:10 PM	#14 (permalink)
ragupasta Senior Artist 149 - 36	Hey looking real clean. Only crit I can spot is that the scale looks a little off, ( could be the shot ), but he looks a little squashed. Head and body look fine, I think it's the short legs and large thighs, the fall-off is too great. Still looks really good, and really clean. I also like the way you've twisted the forarms to try and keep the muscle flow. I dont see many people use that method. Keep it up!! Edit: forearms

08-23-2006, 02:58 AM	#15 (permalink)
benclark Game-Artist.net Staff 2,013 - 290	yeah I noticed that after I posted the pic. I think I may have forgotten to set the focal length on the render camera

08-23-2006, 02:20 PM	#16 (permalink)
benclark Game-Artist.net Staff 2,013 - 290	final model. 3316 tris

08-24-2006, 12:57 PM	#17 (permalink)
benclark Game-Artist.net Staff 2,013 - 290	rigged to test the geometry. Hips are a bit shakey but I'm pretty happy with the deformations overall

08-25-2006, 05:24 AM	#19 (permalink)
Xadeko Senior Artist 176 - 4	that deforms realy good! specialy love the 2nd render