shoulder bag

[jonny]

Normals test on a shoulder bag. I just wanted to play around a bit with cloth folds. The texture is still a wip. Any crit?

[benclark]

great use of the normal map, really nice work and texturing too

the only thing I can see is some wierd shading errors in the top pouch

[Jimi]

Better than any bags I've done.. Only thing that looks weird is that metallic looking thing in the side...

[glynnsmith]

Heh. As exciting as bags go, this is done really nicely. The only thing that pops out to me is the cushioning on the strap looks like it's got a bevel more than it really needs.

Very nice work. Any chance of making a character for this to hang off?

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[Shadow71]

Very very nice, I suppose I should make some joke like "hey looks like that sort of thing is your bag"

[jonny]

thanks boys.....

im not going to make a character though, havn't done a character since I got my job a while back....environment and prop artist ya see.

There are a few things to fix, ill try to get around to them. This was used in a concept enviro scene I was doing and since it was in the background a lot of the mistakes are not visable. Ill see if i can post the enviro, probably not due to nda, but ill see.

thanks again though.

[k1chi]

looks really cool, the only thing i was a little unsure of (and this is total nit picking) is that the folds/lumps of the material on the top flap look a little bit sharp, i was expecting more soft deformation for that kinda material but once it's in with the diffuse it works perfectly. I'm struggling to be critical good work!

[TychoCelchuuu]

It looks pretty good. The only thing I'd fiddle with is the texture; it could use some more saturation in addition to the details you'll probably add later on since it's just a WIP right now. Good job on the normal map and the model though.