This is my first "real" attempt at a game character

[SkwigglesWorth]

Its looking pretty good.
The character is maybe a little short (the legs look the most obvious that they are a bit short). But it is hard to tel from some of the views (on avrage people are about 7 and a half heads tall).

I'm not a big fan of the gas mask with it all being/looking like it is one solid object, everything seems to be smoothly flowing into the next, making look more like a big rubber mask.
I would try modelling the mask as the lot of seprate peice that it would be made up of.
The pattern on the mask also doesn't really work, which I would think you won't need to do if you model each part of it seprate because it will help break it all up.

[Tyan]

Thanks SkwigglesWorth, So as to the model looking short I made a quick overlay in the front orthographic view, if your still seeing a problem please let me know, because it looks okay to me.

Also I got around to a redesign today, still have more work to do on it but I wanted to get a second opinion.







Okay, now I'm done for the day.

Thanks