Urban Environment Post Apoco

jallsopp · 01-17-2007, 02:25 PM

Urban Environment
100,000 polys max
FPS Multiplayer Map

Target Platform: XBOX360
Purpose: Small Practice Project
Genre: FPS Multiplayer
Engine: Xbox360 Dev Kit/Gamebyro/SpeedTree
Tools: 3ds Max, photoshop, Zbrush + normal mapping plugin

Heavy Inspiration from Gears of War/Ghost Recon Advance Warfighter & Nuclear Dawn mod.

All Comments Welcome

Image below are WIP's - MAX Renders Only

1st View

2nd View

3rd View

Concept Gun - Finished Gun

xxrobustchumxx · 01-17-2007, 03:28 PM

i like it, but that guy in the second image sitting behind the tanks with the gun looks a little messed up, brign the gun down just a tad or something. or give him a different one with a different size

jallsopp · 01-17-2007, 03:40 PM

There not realy part of the map just there to show off how multiplayer will be played. I'll get some ingame shots on the 360 up and going soon also a small LAN connection up.

Talon · 01-17-2007, 04:38 PM

If it's for MP, could we have an overview of the map or see any concept work? Can't tell much about the end goal from those shots.

It's looking good, though.

IchII3D · 01-17-2007, 06:06 PM

Hmmm, the overall scene seems alright visually, like the content making sense. But the actual overall enviroment seems very rushed.

From the looks of it you can model. But you seem to have just placed lots and lots of blocks everywhere without really thinking about the strucutre of something. Rather how it looks... does that make sense...

The overall enviroment is nice. Just trying to give C&C

jallsopp · 01-17-2007, 08:42 PM

The terrain shown isnt what ill be using plus most the environment has had a remodel and of course good old normal mapping added. It's just a small thing im doing before i start my industry job next month. Thanks for all comments by the way

NeoShroomish · 01-17-2007, 11:35 PM

The 1st concept gun, needs smoothing obviously but the 2nd one has a bit fat-ass smoothing error on the fore, you'll need to get rid of this or it'll look bad in-game with shaders.

jallsopp · 01-17-2007, 11:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NeoShroomish

The 1st concept gun, needs smoothing obviously but the 2nd one has a bit fat-ass smoothing error on the fore, you'll need to get rid of this or it'll look bad in-game with shaders.

Ahh, no with the guns. The top one is the final and the bottom one is the concept i came up with. Yeah it needs smoothing im also working arround a reflect diverse metalic shader. Sorry if it isnt clear

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NeoShroomish · 01-18-2007, 12:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jallsopp

Ahh, no with the guns. The top one is the final and the bottom one is the concept i came up with. Yeah it needs smoothing im also working arround a reflect diverse metalic shader. Sorry if it isnt clear

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Oops, wrong button.

Yeah, ok I see what you mean but why would you want a metal shader for something that's polymer :P Just saying...

Retro-Cow · 01-18-2007, 12:06 AM

I like what you have done with this. It is a good idea. The buildings with the mesh-like frames are a nice touch. And the overall environment is pretty to the power of 2.

On the guns however.
1. The FN2000 looks very good. Although it looks like you could smooth it a bit more.

2. Your Concept could use a bit of work.
a. There are smoothing problems
b. Seems as though you could use a bit more polys on the gun itself.
c. You'll notice in the 2nd picture down, the soldier holding the concept gun looks like he is shooting a cardboard box. The gun doesn't fit/conform to the body naturally and would not be very effective on the field for that reason.

Hope this helped, and sorry if i sounded too harsh.

01-17-2007, 02:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
jallsopp New Artist 14 - 2	Urban Environment Post Apoco Urban Environment 100,000 polys max FPS Multiplayer Map Target Platform: XBOX360 Purpose: Small Practice Project Genre: FPS Multiplayer Engine: Xbox360 Dev Kit/Gamebyro/SpeedTree Tools: 3ds Max, photoshop, Zbrush + normal mapping plugin Heavy Inspiration from Gears of War/Ghost Recon Advance Warfighter & Nuclear Dawn mod. All Comments Welcome Image below are WIP's - MAX Renders Only 1st View 2nd View 3rd View Concept Gun - Finished Gun

01-17-2007, 04:38 PM	#4 (permalink)
Talon Game-Artist.net Staff 2,770 - 470	If it's for MP, could we have an overview of the map or see any concept work? Can't tell much about the end goal from those shots. It's looking good, though. __________________ > My Portfolio > Hull-Breach Lead Modeler > Supporter of good crits.

01-18-2007, 12:06 AM	#10 (permalink)
Retro-Cow Amateur Artist 414 - 29	I like what you have done with this. It is a good idea. The buildings with the mesh-like frames are a nice touch. And the overall environment is pretty to the power of 2. On the guns however. 1. The FN2000 looks very good. Although it looks like you could smooth it a bit more. 2. Your Concept could use a bit of work. a. There are smoothing problems b. Seems as though you could use a bit more polys on the gun itself. c. You'll notice in the 2nd picture down, the soldier holding the concept gun looks like he is shooting a cardboard box. The gun doesn't fit/conform to the body naturally and would not be very effective on the field for that reason. Hope this helped, and sorry if i sounded too harsh. __________________ Supports Good Crits Portfolio

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01-17-2007, 03:28 PM	#2 (permalink)
xxrobustchumxx Artist 71 - 0	i like it, but that guy in the second image sitting behind the tanks with the gun looks a little messed up, brign the gun down just a tad or something. or give him a different one with a different size

01-17-2007, 03:40 PM	#3 (permalink)
jallsopp New Artist 14 - 2	There not realy part of the map just there to show off how multiplayer will be played. I'll get some ingame shots on the 360 up and going soon also a small LAN connection up.

01-17-2007, 06:06 PM	#5 (permalink)
IchII3D Game Art Student 330 - 12	Hmmm, the overall scene seems alright visually, like the content making sense. But the actual overall enviroment seems very rushed. From the looks of it you can model. But you seem to have just placed lots and lots of blocks everywhere without really thinking about the strucutre of something. Rather how it looks... does that make sense... The overall enviroment is nice. Just trying to give C&C

01-17-2007, 08:42 PM	#6 (permalink)
jallsopp New Artist 14 - 2	The terrain shown isnt what ill be using plus most the environment has had a remodel and of course good old normal mapping added. It's just a small thing im doing before i start my industry job next month. Thanks for all comments by the way

01-17-2007, 11:35 PM	#7 (permalink)
NeoShroomish Senior Artist 208 - 12	The 1st concept gun, needs smoothing obviously but the 2nd one has a bit fat-ass smoothing error on the fore, you'll need to get rid of this or it'll look bad in-game with shaders.