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[kaze369]

Here is a more detailed version I made today. Next, I'll come up with a color concept.

[kaze369]

[Nielsen]

Red, I think it keeps in theme with Mass Effect the most.

Besides that, I believe the wing could use a bit more open space to it, if you look at the Normandy the hull isn't fused to the wing as it does in your concept. I'm not saying copy it but you could "open up" your ship a bit more, it looks a bit static.

Keep it up though, as a ME fan myself I enjoy seeing this come to life.

[kaze369]

Originally Posted by Nielsen

Red, I think it keeps in theme with Mass Effect the most.

Besides that, I believe the wing could use a bit more open space to it, if you look at the Normandy the hull isn't fused to the wing as it does in your concept. I'm not saying copy it but you could "open up" your ship a bit more, it looks a bit static.

Keep it up though, as a ME fan myself I enjoy seeing this come to life.

I'm still a little bit unclear about what you mean by "open up", but I do see something i could add to the design. i think expanding the wings would be good. Even though I'm getting a lot of good feedback, I still get that feeling that it's not a Mass Effect look. I'm no concept artist but I think I'm good enough to illustrate a concept idea.

Total count:
Black: 0
Blue: 1
Red: 1
Yellow: 2

[Nielsen]

"put some more holes in it" basically to make it look a bit more dynamic.

[kaze369]

Originally Posted by Nielsen

"put some more holes in it" basically to make it look a bit more dynamic.

I kinda see what you mean, but part of my design was to have the wings and the body together like the F-35.

[Skamberin]

My vote goes for yellow. I like your design so far, can't really pick on anything. If I could suggest anything it'd be that the cylindrical objects on the back part of the shop would be rotated a bit backwards, this might fit better with the aerodynamic design (though there is no resistance in space, so it wouldn't really matter :P).
Good job so far, looking forward to your progress

[bbob]

Deep red orange would be ace

LIKE THIS

[kaze369]

Trying a red/yellow theme and I extended the wing thrusters.
Not sure if I like it.


Update:

After about 30 minutes of not looking at it, I realize now that I hate it. I'll have to figure out something else.

[kaze369]

Sorry guys for not having an update lately, I'm working on an iPhone game with my friends using Unity 3D engine.