WIP: Goliath Gargoyle

kratos · 01-10-2007, 05:31 AM

Hey all,

Just wanted to share with you guys this model I have been working on .

Any crits welcomed

WesleyTack · 01-10-2007, 06:34 AM

You should add the bone structure of the wings on top as models, and make the wings a single plane. It will look better in the end, and probably save you some polys, but more importantly save you texture space. Unless you really want the inside of the wings to be a different texture. His boobs also look a bit too big, and the tail would be thinner near the end I think? Same for the cloth around the waist, make it a single plane.

kratos · 01-10-2007, 07:07 AM

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Originally Posted by WesleyTack

You should add the bone structure of the wings on top as models, and make the wings a single plane. It will look better in the end, and probably save you some polys, but more importantly save you texture space. Unless you really want the inside of the wings to be a different texture. His boobs also look a bit too big, and the tail would be thinner near the end I think? Same for the cloth around the waist, make it a single plane.

Yeah i tried modeling the bone structure before but used way to many polies .. So all the bones will be textured in. I agree with the single sided wing and cloth thanks for that

Oh and yeah .. he does need some toning down in the chest area doesn't he

xxrobustchumxx · 01-11-2007, 10:54 PM

The body is nice, you should definitly give those wings a little bit more detail and to see an animation of that would be pretty cool

kratos · 01-20-2007, 01:56 AM

Okay time for an update

Any crits welcomed . Wings are now single planed when it comes ot the webbing between the bones.

and some wire frames

Daedalus · 01-20-2007, 02:05 PM

Really well done
Poly Flow seem fine , model is very similar to Goliath
only thing i would add is another edge loop in the wing for deformation purpose
i'll add an image ASAP
Maybe not the best topology ever but more anatomic imo, Will Deform better when animated
If possible try to keep the same count of joint in your wing bone.

hve fun

kratos · 01-23-2007, 09:17 AM

Thanks for that Daedalus, I adjusted the wings and moved his legs to a more natural pose. Any crits welcomed.

01-10-2007, 05:31 AM	#1 (permalink)
kratos Artist 58 - 12	WIP: Goliath Gargoyle Hey all, Just wanted to share with you guys this model I have been working on . Any crits welcomed

01-10-2007, 06:34 AM	#2 (permalink)
WesleyTack Industry Artist 402 - 27	You should add the bone structure of the wings on top as models, and make the wings a single plane. It will look better in the end, and probably save you some polys, but more importantly save you texture space. Unless you really want the inside of the wings to be a different texture. His boobs also look a bit too big, and the tail would be thinner near the end I think? Same for the cloth around the waist, make it a single plane. __________________ www.wesleytack.com www.off-limits.be www.dice.se

01-20-2007, 02:05 PM	#6 (permalink)
Daedalus Industry Artist 173 - 15	Really well done Poly Flow seem fine , model is very similar to Goliath only thing i would add is another edge loop in the wing for deformation purpose i'll add an image ASAP Maybe not the best topology ever but more anatomic imo, Will Deform better when animated If possible try to keep the same count of joint in your wing bone. hve fun __________________ DAEDALUS's Garage David B PortFolio Last edited by Daedalus; 01-20-2007 at 02:14 PM.

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01-11-2007, 10:54 PM	#4 (permalink)
xxrobustchumxx Artist 71 - 0	The body is nice, you should definitly give those wings a little bit more detail and to see an animation of that would be pretty cool

01-20-2007, 01:56 AM	#5 (permalink)
kratos Artist 58 - 12	Okay time for an update Any crits welcomed . Wings are now single planed when it comes ot the webbing between the bones. and some wire frames

01-23-2007, 09:17 AM	#7 (permalink)
kratos Artist 58 - 12	Thanks for that Daedalus, I adjusted the wings and moved his legs to a more natural pose. Any crits welcomed.