Times bomb

[Corentin3D]

Hello all the world,

Here, I open a wip to have your councils and others.
I am currently spirit to carry out a “times bomb” for my training, in order to make a complete environment.
I am really sorry if my English can seem null, because has the base I do not speak absolutely English, therefore I use a translator, and the translator cannot translate has 100%, therefore thank you for your comprehension!
Here is, place with the images.

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[Dennispls]

Looks like a solid model.
Lets see this bad boy textured

[Corentin3D]

Don't hello, I understand what you would like to say? Could you explain me?
Good, here a first jet of texture.

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Bye

[Corentin3D]

Continuation has a criticism on another forum, I have to change one can the map.

[leidan_37]

Nice work Corentin.
I have only two things I would suggest.

1) make the explosive tube less uniform, add a little but of dirt to them or something.
2) try adding stickers/decals to them like in this picture
(maybe try this decal)

[tyl3r]

Hey there Corentin3D.

I really like the model, and think the bake turned out good as well. I do think that the texture still needs work though. Can we see your UV layout? It seems as if the red sticks of dynamite aren't getting the appropriate amount of UV space or the texture you used for it was way too big and pixellated. They come across as a bit too noisy in my honest opinion. But keep up the good work!

I have no doubt that this will look real good when you have completed it!

[Corentin3D]

Hello,

Yes here the image:



thx

[tyl3r]

I take it the rectangles on the bottom are the sticks of dynamite? Is there any reason why there has to be 7 of them? Do you have ambient occlusion baked out? If not, then I would definitely converse UV space by overlapping similar UVs where applicable. Such as only one red stick of dynamite that takes up the entire bottom of the texture. If you make it seamless, you can rotate each stick, and they all will look different.

[Corentin3D]

Yes, it is what I learned during the realization from this dynamite, I do not seek has to make superb things, but to learn one from them can more has each time.
Here, I think of stopping relating to it that, because I learned 2/3 things above which I would apply has my next creation.