Character WIP: Sundae Girl

Jonasz · 29-08-2009, 03:16 PM

Hello all, this is my first post and WIP thread here. I'll try make first character model.
Modeling in XSI. I am hoping to finish this character.
Critique is very wanted. Thanks all!

Concept:

Rili · 01-09-2009, 06:57 AM

Looks real nice, what picture are you using as ref?

Jonasz · 01-09-2009, 08:31 AM

Hi, before Imageshack lost link, I corect .
I would like make for low poly. Now I havent got big experience.

Jimi · 01-09-2009, 08:43 AM

Does she really need that suit to sell/do icecream? Well, the suit looks pretty nice anyway :P

TolenX · 01-09-2009, 11:40 AM

The concept looks sweet and the model seems to have decent edge flow aside from some pinching and intersecting in certain areas, which I am sure you could fix.

Pankake · 01-09-2009, 12:00 PM

Saw this on PC, awesome concept. But I noticed some flaws on the model. Her breasts are very high up, almost level with her shoulders, and her torso tapers strangely from wide hips to narrow chest.
And I'm not sure how the elbow joint is going to deform with that suit, doesn't look good!.

Rest is great, love the helmet.

Jonasz · 02-09-2009, 06:54 PM

::Jimi:: Woman is specialist for tasks chemical - biologically

::TolenX:: Thank

::Pankake:: Thank for attention, it helps me a lot. I try correct with elbow... maybe i put rigging. Then, I will see where is wrong.... Heh, my english

Updeit...

Jonasz · 04-09-2009, 09:41 PM

I correct face
Some anatomical errors ?

MEK · 05-09-2009, 04:18 AM

That my friend, Is really really cool. Keep at it!

TolenX · 05-09-2009, 10:48 AM

The face is beautiful, really solid anatomy and appeal. I really like the hair. A couple things need adjusting.

1. The upper eyelid is missing, not that it isn't there but it can't be seen.

2. The corner of the lower lip is a bit sharp and needs to blend smoother into the chin/cheek area.

It looks great, waiting for more updates.

29-08-2009, 03:16 PM	#1 (permalink)
Jonasz New Member 12 - 1	Character WIP: Sundae Girl Hello all, this is my first post and WIP thread here. I'll try make first character model. Modeling in XSI. I am hoping to finish this character. Critique is very wanted. Thanks all! Concept: __________________ p.o.r.t.f.o.l.i.o My English is no good. Last edited by Jonasz; 01-09-2009 at 08:25 AM.

01-09-2009, 08:31 AM	#3 (permalink)
Jonasz New Member 12 - 1	Hi, before Imageshack lost link, I corect . I would like make for low poly. Now I havent got big experience. __________________ p.o.r.t.f.o.l.i.o My English is no good.

01-09-2009, 08:43 AM	#4 (permalink)
Jimi Senior Member 920 - 46	Does she really need that suit to sell/do icecream? Well, the suit looks pretty nice anyway :P __________________ zbang! Ghar'nfgh! Vhlaar mnigh ghar'nfgh ikah mlatf a'tafhg'hash!

01-09-2009, 11:40 AM	#5 (permalink)
TolenX New Member 15 - 3	The concept looks sweet and the model seems to have decent edge flow aside from some pinching and intersecting in certain areas, which I am sure you could fix. __________________ www.AdamDSullivan.com

01-09-2009, 12:00 PM	#6 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,724 - 262	Saw this on PC, awesome concept. But I noticed some flaws on the model. Her breasts are very high up, almost level with her shoulders, and her torso tapers strangely from wide hips to narrow chest. And I'm not sure how the elbow joint is going to deform with that suit, doesn't look good!. Rest is great, love the helmet. __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio

01-09-2009, 06:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
Rili Amateur Artist 78 - 11	Looks real nice, what picture are you using as ref?

02-09-2009, 06:54 PM	#7 (permalink)
Jonasz New Member 12 - 1	::Jimi:: Woman is specialist for tasks chemical - biologically ::TolenX:: Thank ::Pankake:: Thank for attention, it helps me a lot. I try correct with elbow... maybe i put rigging. Then, I will see where is wrong.... Heh, my english Updeit... __________________ p.o.r.t.f.o.l.i.o My English is no good.

04-09-2009, 09:41 PM	#8 (permalink)
Jonasz New Member 12 - 1	I correct face Some anatomical errors ? __________________ p.o.r.t.f.o.l.i.o My English is no good. Last edited by Jonasz; 04-09-2009 at 09:51 PM.

05-09-2009, 04:18 AM	#9 (permalink)
MEK Frequenter 79 - 3	That my friend, Is really really cool. Keep at it!

05-09-2009, 10:48 AM	#10 (permalink)
TolenX New Member 15 - 3	The face is beautiful, really solid anatomy and appeal. I really like the hair. A couple things need adjusting. 1. The upper eyelid is missing, not that it isn't there but it can't be seen. 2. The corner of the lower lip is a bit sharp and needs to blend smoother into the chin/cheek area. It looks great, waiting for more updates. __________________ www.AdamDSullivan.com

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