First Game Character: ToxX - Page 2

MichaelebJohnson · 25-08-2009, 11:49 PM

K, so I've been sculpting,

I'm not sure how I feel about the leather jacket wrinkles, I think they may be too subtle, also im not sure how I feel about, the Boots, they are leather, but I think the Wrinkles may be reading more as a soft cloth.

PROGRESS!

doylle · 26-08-2009, 01:38 AM

Hmm, yea, those creases on the jacket do look very very subtle, i think they'll just disappear in the model when you add more detail...

did a quick google search on leather jacket, the creases are generaly quite big (except for the small detail creases), personally i'd try to add more of those.

TolenX · 26-08-2009, 09:59 AM

The shaders in ZBrush see a lot of fine detail easily, when you make a normal map from the sculpt it won't show as well when you render it. So you can definitely accentuate the wrinkles in the jacket.

I like the boot wrinkles, it might not hurt to clear away some of the smaller ones to keep the leather look though. I would think with any cloth wrapped around those large round parts it would stretch in that region pretty tightly. Unless it has relaxed over time, then it would sag around the large circle.

MichaelebJohnson · 31-08-2009, 04:22 PM

thanks for the feedback guys!
A lot more sculpting.

MichaelebJohnson · 01-09-2009, 07:14 PM

Been A poly painting!

crits comments are always wonderful!

pantsburgh · 01-09-2009, 08:54 PM

About the subtle details in the jacket - I still think they need some deepening, can't tell if they changed at all in the latest pics on account of the different materials. However, if you deepen them, bake the NM, and still think they're too subtle you can always deepen portions of the normal map as needed.

It's looking great, looking forward to more progress.

PFKM · 01-09-2009, 09:10 PM

wow, that really looks pretty sweet...i really like the style of it.

Keep it up!

Topher · 04-09-2009, 02:43 PM

I think the design has a great style to it that seems to have been lost on the model, Mainly in the hair.
My only critic would be to try and match the concept more.
Looks good tho, keep us posted.

Topher · 04-09-2009, 02:44 PM

Ooh I just notice the z sculpts, try and make larger wrinkles, you model is cartoony and the wrinkles can be a little exaggerated as well.

JMChristopher · 04-09-2009, 02:46 PM

LOL, finish here eyes plz! Its just creepy like that!

Model is good, texture looks so far, its just those big white spheres for eyes, makes me think of the grudge from some reason.

25-08-2009, 11:49 PM	#11 (permalink)
MichaelebJohnson New Member 5 - 0	K, so I've been sculpting, I'm not sure how I feel about the leather jacket wrinkles, I think they may be too subtle, also im not sure how I feel about, the Boots, they are leather, but I think the Wrinkles may be reading more as a soft cloth. PROGRESS! __________________ Saying you cant is just a sad way of admitting you wont. Last edited by MichaelebJohnson; 26-08-2009 at 04:52 AM.

26-08-2009, 01:38 AM	#12 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,375 - 4,400	Hmm, yea, those creases on the jacket do look very very subtle, i think they'll just disappear in the model when you add more detail... did a quick google search on leather jacket, the creases are generaly quite big (except for the small detail creases), personally i'd try to add more of those. __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

26-08-2009, 09:59 AM	#13 (permalink)
TolenX New Member 15 - 4	The shaders in ZBrush see a lot of fine detail easily, when you make a normal map from the sculpt it won't show as well when you render it. So you can definitely accentuate the wrinkles in the jacket. I like the boot wrinkles, it might not hurt to clear away some of the smaller ones to keep the leather look though. I would think with any cloth wrapped around those large round parts it would stretch in that region pretty tightly. Unless it has relaxed over time, then it would sag around the large circle. __________________ www.AdamDSullivan.com

31-08-2009, 04:22 PM	#14 (permalink)
MichaelebJohnson New Member 5 - 0	thanks for the feedback guys! A lot more sculpting. __________________ Saying you cant is just a sad way of admitting you wont.

01-09-2009, 07:14 PM	#15 (permalink)
MichaelebJohnson New Member 5 - 0	Been A poly painting! crits comments are always wonderful! __________________ Saying you cant is just a sad way of admitting you wont.

01-09-2009, 08:54 PM	#16 (permalink)
pantsburgh Frequenter 115 - 29	About the subtle details in the jacket - I still think they need some deepening, can't tell if they changed at all in the latest pics on account of the different materials. However, if you deepen them, bake the NM, and still think they're too subtle you can always deepen portions of the normal map as needed. It's looking great, looking forward to more progress. __________________ Welcome to Pantsburgh: No shirt, no shoes, no problem!

01-09-2009, 09:10 PM	#17 (permalink)
PFKM PinkFluffyKillingMachine 28 - 5	wow, that really looks pretty sweet...i really like the style of it. Keep it up!

04-09-2009, 02:43 PM	#18 (permalink)
Topher New Member 20 - 0	I think the design has a great style to it that seems to have been lost on the model, Mainly in the hair. My only critic would be to try and match the concept more. Looks good tho, keep us posted. __________________ My website http://www.treefrogartstudio.com My latest demo reel http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKp5r-1PQTw

04-09-2009, 02:44 PM	#19 (permalink)
Topher New Member 20 - 0	Ooh I just notice the z sculpts, try and make larger wrinkles, you model is cartoony and the wrinkles can be a little exaggerated as well. __________________ My website http://www.treefrogartstudio.com My latest demo reel http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKp5r-1PQTw

04-09-2009, 02:46 PM	#20 (permalink)
JMChristopher Senior Member 294 - 54	LOL, finish here eyes plz! Its just creepy like that! Model is good, texture looks so far, its just those big white spheres for eyes, makes me think of the grudge from some reason. __________________ JMChristopher.com Good Critz

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