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A Shop, Soon to be Department Store!
Here's a W.I.P, Big Buns Bakery ( Get the double entendre?)
This is my first solo attempt at level design, I threw in a bit of Rockstar's humor.... ![]() Be Sure To Visit My Website Last edited by Ryder911; 01-03-2007 at 03:50 PM. |
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Okay, everything seems to be over-sized, which gives the impression that it's miniature, from the thickness of the walls steps and doors, to the brick texture, also it's pretty much a box, check out some references of some architecture and I'm sure you won't ever see a building like this
.Another thing is the sign, looks like that of a night club or strip bar, bakeries usually have a little neon sign in the window, or a nice bagel logo or something, depending on how much the shop has to spend on prettying the place up. I know it's still WIP, which is why I won't go into details like doorhandles, drain pipes and what-not. Keep on crackin' Aaron. |
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Try and getting some good reference and critically study them compared to yours, take some ideas and keep working at it, got a long way to go but keep at it man!
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