A Shop, Soon to be Department Store!

[Ryder911]

Here's a W.I.P, Big Buns Bakery ( Get the double entendre?)

This is my first solo attempt at level design, I threw in a bit of Rockstar's humor....



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[Pankake]

Okay, everything seems to be over-sized, which gives the impression that it's miniature, from the thickness of the walls steps and doors, to the brick texture, also it's pretty much a box, check out some references of some architecture and I'm sure you won't ever see a building like this .

Another thing is the sign, looks like that of a night club or strip bar, bakeries usually have a little neon sign in the window, or a nice bagel logo or something, depending on how much the shop has to spend on prettying the place up. I know it's still WIP, which is why I won't go into details like doorhandles, drain pipes and what-not.
Keep on crackin'

Aaron.

[Sean-D-Omega]

Try and getting some good reference and critically study them compared to yours, take some ideas and keep working at it, got a long way to go but keep at it man!