M14

[Retro-Cow]

Constructive Criticism please, hold the onions.
Cant see much yet, will post more as progress.

[Pankake]

Looks like you've got the shapes down, Iron sight is nice and detailed, should look good from the first person perspective, nothing to crit as of yet without a wireframe, pretty renders are nice but when showing other artists your work a wireframe screen capture is always more usefull . None of my business but are you not going to texture your 'Remmington 870 Supermag'? .

[Retro-Cow]

It has been textured but it looks bad. Why? Would you like to?

[Pankake]

Hehe, no thanks, would be cool to see though, but I'm guessing you didn't do it?

[Schuey]

nice start, only i have my doubts about the charging handle though, the part below the rear sight im not sure if its well observed either.

[Retro-Cow]

Originally Posted by Schuey

nice start, only i have my doubts about the charging handle though, the part below the rear sight im not sure if its well observed either.

What do you mean?

[mainframe]

Originally Posted by Retro-Cow

What do you mean?

Part of the sights mesh is going through another. Maybe make it all one mesh or a smoother transition into each other.

[enin]

looks quite nice, but it's not the best render to judge from

[Schuey]

Originally Posted by Retro-Cow

What do you mean?

the part where you pull on, thats what i meant here, refs for you:

[enin]

if you already know this webpage, then it's alright, otherwise you might check it out:

http://modelguns.co.uk/m14_rifle.htm