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Old 01-01-2007, 09:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Constructive Criticism please, hold the onions.
Cant see much yet, will post more as progress.

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Old 01-01-2007, 09:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks like you've got the shapes down, Iron sight is nice and detailed, should look good from the first person perspective, nothing to crit as of yet without a wireframe, pretty renders are nice but when showing other artists your work a wireframe screen capture is always more usefull . None of my business but are you not going to texture your 'Remmington 870 Supermag'? .
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Old 01-01-2007, 09:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It has been textured but it looks bad. Why? Would you like to?
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Old 01-01-2007, 10:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hehe, no thanks, would be cool to see though, but I'm guessing you didn't do it?
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Old 01-03-2007, 07:27 AM   #5 (permalink)
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nice start, only i have my doubts about the charging handle though, the part below the rear sight im not sure if its well observed either.

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Old 01-03-2007, 05:10 PM   #6 (permalink)
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nice start, only i have my doubts about the charging handle though, the part below the rear sight im not sure if its well observed either.
What do you mean?
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Old 01-04-2007, 03:21 AM   #7 (permalink)
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What do you mean?
Part of the sights mesh is going through another. Maybe make it all one mesh or a smoother transition into each other.
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Old 01-04-2007, 04:13 AM   #8 (permalink)
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looks quite nice, but it's not the best render to judge from
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Old 01-04-2007, 04:51 AM   #9 (permalink)
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What do you mean?

the part where you pull on, thats what i meant here, refs for you:


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Old 01-04-2007, 05:30 AM   #10 (permalink)
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if you already know this webpage, then it's alright, otherwise you might check it out:

http://modelguns.co.uk/m14_rifle.htm
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