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Old 20-04-2009, 09:17 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello

Sai dagger - model 1384 tris , textures color and normal 1024x1024

Model for this project Jack's Adventure
All crits are welcome and needed.

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3333/sai.jpg

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2082/sai2.jpg

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9959/saiuv.jpg

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/667/textops.jpg

HP version
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/6780/43529066.jpg
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Old 20-04-2009, 06:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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You're overusing some triangles there: the structure after the grip should have more rings (making a better curve) and less loops (some aren't even doing anything to the shape there right now)

Other than that, a nice model and a great project (can't understand the project site, though... shouldn't you offer a translated version?)
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Old 21-04-2009, 05:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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this is english version Jack's Adventure

but not much information you find there , becasue project just begin

thanks for interesting and advice
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Old 21-04-2009, 08:10 AM   #4 (permalink)
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more stuff

swing : 1364 tris , textures : color , normal 1024x1024

hoe : 356 tris , textures: color , normal 1024x1024

What is it for?: static decoration models in village (Jack's Adventure)

swing :




textures :http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4595/husttext.jpg

hoe:



textures : http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4144/motykatext.jpg
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Old 21-04-2009, 12:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Shouldn't the blade of the slag.. er i mean hoe be sharper? Also the log used as a pivot on the swing seems odd in that position. I think you should rotate the log so that extrusion is leaning against the ground, but that's a pretty simple fix, I should think.

Overall though, everything seems pretty good. I like the style of these pieces.
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Old 24-04-2009, 05:59 AM   #6 (permalink)
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something more special , but polycount it's too big :/


Model : 2476 trsi
textures : color , normal , spec 1024x1024


grenade M26A1







textures :

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/7488/granattex.jpg

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M26A1 - Wyszukiwarka Grafiki Google
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