doylles collection of pixels and vertices. - Page 11

benclark · 21-05-2008, 08:26 AM

you showed me this on msn the other night and I gave you some half assed crits, but I took a break from texturing to do it properly.

The main problem I see is some missing muscles, especially in the shoulder and around the outside of the pecs and the laterals. They dont have to be massively bulky but they should affect the shape more. Hope this is some help...

doylle · 21-05-2008, 02:03 PM

Awsome, thanks man. i'll definitly try to get all of those fixed for the final piece!

doylle · 13-06-2008, 01:59 PM

I wasn't realy sure if i'd put my "final" of the character on, i wasn't able to make all the changes ben suggested, and i realy don't want to give the impressiont that i'm ignoring them. Time just didn't allow me to do them, had to rush to get all the rest done as it was. However, i do plan to go over them when things calm down next week...

This is how it turned out:

I'm quite pleased with the results. The texture is a bit sloppy, had to rush it from the begin to the end, so there are quite a few places that i should probably clean up... tricount is around 9k

Jimi · 13-06-2008, 02:10 PM

The head and neck looks very big. Texture looks nice.

Diegio · 13-06-2008, 02:34 PM

Looks like he's guarding something.
Good work, Doylle!

chrizz1 · 13-06-2008, 05:34 PM

For such tights jeans he isnt sporting much of a package!,

also the neck looks slightly too stretched in my opinion like if he tried to look up he wouldnt be able to, also the adams apple seems alot long?
adams apple
best picture I could find to show my point,

apart from that I really like the style!

chris

p.s. he looks gaunt! thats the word I was looking for, not a crit just an observation but Im guessing you meant him to come out like that

doylle · 18-06-2008, 02:46 AM

Thanks guys. I'll try to get those things fixed...

In the meantime, i decided to go back what I originaly started with, mapping. It has been ages since i've done any of it, but preparing stuff for a UT3 map (DM). I have a floorplan more or less in my head, but that it still very very wip. The theme however is set. It's going to be an underground lab where they grow all kinds of vegetation.

sooooo, my first prop:

Can hardly wait to start on the diffuse...

benclark · 18-06-2008, 04:44 AM

oh man you gotta get something cool and organic in that chamber, Alien4 style

Fuzzball · 18-06-2008, 06:17 PM

I like it but i would replace the lego texture with possibly one of Game-Artist.net's sponor ads or something of the sort.

Talon · 18-06-2008, 06:40 PM

This could be very cool, Jeroen

Looking forward to seeing it come together.

21-05-2008, 08:26 AM	#101 (permalink)
benclark Industry Artist 2,317 - 495	you showed me this on msn the other night and I gave you some half assed crits, but I took a break from texturing to do it properly. The main problem I see is some missing muscles, especially in the shoulder and around the outside of the pecs and the laterals. They dont have to be massively bulky but they should affect the shape more. Hope this is some help... __________________ www.benjaminclark.net My Sketchbook

21-05-2008, 02:03 PM	#102 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,373 - 3,721	Awsome, thanks man. i'll definitly try to get all of those fixed for the final piece! __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

13-06-2008, 01:59 PM	#103 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,373 - 3,721	I wasn't realy sure if i'd put my "final" of the character on, i wasn't able to make all the changes ben suggested, and i realy don't want to give the impressiont that i'm ignoring them. Time just didn't allow me to do them, had to rush to get all the rest done as it was. However, i do plan to go over them when things calm down next week... This is how it turned out: I'm quite pleased with the results. The texture is a bit sloppy, had to rush it from the begin to the end, so there are quite a few places that i should probably clean up... tricount is around 9k __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook Last edited by doylle; 13-06-2008 at 02:01 PM.

13-06-2008, 02:10 PM	#104 (permalink)
Jimi Senior Member 1,025 - 97	The head and neck looks very big. Texture looks nice. __________________ zbang! My 3d sketchbook - Swamp Warrior

13-06-2008, 02:34 PM	#105 (permalink)
Diegio Frequenter 143 - 25	Looks like he's guarding something. Good work, Doylle! __________________ Working with www.thinkplaystudios.com

13-06-2008, 05:34 PM	#106 (permalink)
chrizz1 Senior Member 228 - 28	For such tights jeans he isnt sporting much of a package!, also the neck looks slightly too stretched in my opinion like if he tried to look up he wouldnt be able to, also the adams apple seems alot long? adams apple best picture I could find to show my point, apart from that I really like the style! chris p.s. he looks gaunt! thats the word I was looking for, not a crit just an observation but Im guessing you meant him to come out like that __________________

18-06-2008, 02:46 AM	#107 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,373 - 3,721	Thanks guys. I'll try to get those things fixed... In the meantime, i decided to go back what I originaly started with, mapping. It has been ages since i've done any of it, but preparing stuff for a UT3 map (DM). I have a floorplan more or less in my head, but that it still very very wip. The theme however is set. It's going to be an underground lab where they grow all kinds of vegetation. sooooo, my first prop: Can hardly wait to start on the diffuse... __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

18-06-2008, 04:44 AM	#108 (permalink)
benclark Industry Artist 2,317 - 495	oh man you gotta get something cool and organic in that chamber, Alien4 style __________________ www.benjaminclark.net My Sketchbook

18-06-2008, 06:17 PM	#109 (permalink)
Fuzzball New Member 73 - 40	I like it but i would replace the lego texture with possibly one of Game-Artist.net's sponor ads or something of the sort.

18-06-2008, 06:40 PM	#110 (permalink)
Talon Industry Artist 3,798 - 1,359	This could be very cool, Jeroen Looking forward to seeing it come together. __________________ > My Portfolio > Supporter of good crits.

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