Welding Vertices - Sketchbook - Page 15

Mistry · 08-03-2010, 10:14 PM

so w/ an update on the textures. I plan to finish the diffuse tomorrow night.

Mistry · 10-03-2010, 11:43 PM

so back with a bit more. i fixed up bits of the tank. I plan on finishing the textures this weekend and have the entire project done on Tuesday of next week. Then move on to another vehicle

Mistry · 12-03-2010, 11:45 PM

Finally finishing up the indian taxi. There are some simple test renders of how i want the car. I plan to have this finished by next friday !

SAMFISHA · 14-03-2010, 12:59 PM

I really liked your 1944 scene. Please dont ruin it with that tank!

Sir Apple · 14-03-2010, 05:53 PM

Why would it ruin the scene??

Its a great peice of work... the only problem still is the barrel is to long!

By the way I'm diggin the Taxi

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Mistry · 15-03-2010, 09:52 AM

thanks, i like the taxi alot too

and i'll fix that barrel.....soon ? maybe next time...

update: !

tank is almost done. just need to refine everything and render it in the scene.

working on a new tree, here is the bottom of it and its about half way done

Mistry · 15-03-2010, 10:35 AM

DONE !!!

turtlepaste · 15-03-2010, 12:25 PM

your sculpting skills are improving a lot mistry, nice work. Something about your Bombay scene still bugs me though. I think it might be that you have all these great signs and detail on the buildings in the front, which is awesome, but the buildings in the back look very boring, with not much going on at all. I don't think adding more detail to the bg would cause any composition problems, because you are already using a bit of fog to draw the attention forward. Also the purple sign in the top left is, I'm assuming, isn't attached to that building in the bg, but because of where it is placed it's pole is sharing the same line as the top of the building behind it, and it looks a bit strange. It looks almost as if it is attached to that building in the bg but it has no atmospheric perspective.

Mr.Guybrush · 16-03-2010, 07:45 AM

Could do with some blur in the background to make the foreground pop out a bit more. I think the street itself looks a little empty, a bit of rubbish neat the drains would make it look even better. I love the feel of the scene though, although the wooden sign dead centre of the scene looks unfinished to me (I know its pointing the other way), perhaps add some torn off artwork/old sign on the back of it?

Mistry · 16-03-2010, 10:44 PM

Thanks for the thoughts and comments Guybrush and turtlepaste.

08-03-2010, 10:14 PM	#141 (permalink)
Mistry Senior Member 380 - 51	so w/ an update on the textures. I plan to finish the diffuse tomorrow night. __________________ www.HitenMistry.com Environment Artist Sketchbook

10-03-2010, 11:43 PM	#142 (permalink)
Mistry Senior Member 380 - 51	so back with a bit more. i fixed up bits of the tank. I plan on finishing the textures this weekend and have the entire project done on Tuesday of next week. Then move on to another vehicle __________________ www.HitenMistry.com Environment Artist Sketchbook

12-03-2010, 11:45 PM	#143 (permalink)
Mistry Senior Member 380 - 51	Finally finishing up the indian taxi. There are some simple test renders of how i want the car. I plan to have this finished by next friday ! __________________ www.HitenMistry.com Environment Artist Sketchbook

14-03-2010, 05:53 PM	#145 (permalink)
Sir Apple Forum Leader 674 - 101	Why would it ruin the scene?? Its a great peice of work... the only problem still is the barrel is to long! By the way I'm diggin the Taxi . __________________ LinkedIn

15-03-2010, 09:52 AM	#146 (permalink)
Mistry Senior Member 380 - 51	thanks, i like the taxi alot too and i'll fix that barrel.....soon ? maybe next time... update: ! tank is almost done. just need to refine everything and render it in the scene. working on a new tree, here is the bottom of it and its about half way done __________________ www.HitenMistry.com Environment Artist Sketchbook

14-03-2010, 12:59 PM	#144 (permalink)
SAMFISHA New Member 27 - 7	I really liked your 1944 scene. Please dont ruin it with that tank!

15-03-2010, 10:35 AM	#147 (permalink)
Mistry Senior Member 380 - 51	DONE !!! __________________ www.HitenMistry.com Environment Artist Sketchbook

15-03-2010, 12:25 PM	#148 (permalink)
turtlepaste Senior Member 156 - 23	your sculpting skills are improving a lot mistry, nice work. Something about your Bombay scene still bugs me though. I think it might be that you have all these great signs and detail on the buildings in the front, which is awesome, but the buildings in the back look very boring, with not much going on at all. I don't think adding more detail to the bg would cause any composition problems, because you are already using a bit of fog to draw the attention forward. Also the purple sign in the top left is, I'm assuming, isn't attached to that building in the bg, but because of where it is placed it's pole is sharing the same line as the top of the building behind it, and it looks a bit strange. It looks almost as if it is attached to that building in the bg but it has no atmospheric perspective. __________________ My Portfolio My sketchbook

16-03-2010, 07:45 AM	#149 (permalink)
Mr.Guybrush Frequenter 83 - 25	Could do with some blur in the background to make the foreground pop out a bit more. I think the street itself looks a little empty, a bit of rubbish neat the drains would make it look even better. I love the feel of the scene though, although the wooden sign dead centre of the scene looks unfinished to me (I know its pointing the other way), perhaps add some torn off artwork/old sign on the back of it? __________________

16-03-2010, 10:44 PM	#150 (permalink)
Mistry Senior Member 380 - 51	Thanks for the thoughts and comments Guybrush and turtlepaste. __________________ www.HitenMistry.com Environment Artist Sketchbook

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