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Old 08-07-2009, 06:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Mr Lambdas Sketchbook

Hello.
I join some weeks ago. Now I will start a Sketchbook, because I think it will be the best way to show you my work. I work with Cinema 4D over 2 years, but for this time I think I am really bad at 3D.

For my first post a knuckle duster will be enough.

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Old 08-07-2009, 07:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome,

Your object has a lot of polygons that do not contribute to the actual shape.
Try to optimise it as best as you can.
Also this object is fairly simple to make so i would love to see some more complicated stuff
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Old 08-07-2009, 09:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Your edgeloops seem to be a bit haywire and incredibly inefficient. The actual form of it looks like the metal's been melted down slightly.

it almost looks like you've modelled it out and subdivided it once to make it rounder.
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Old 08-07-2009, 11:28 AM   #4 (permalink)
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it almost looks like you've modelled it out and subdivided it once to make it rounder.
Thats Right. It was the easiest way to get a result that I like. Maybe not the best, but it was enough for my uses.

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