Portfolio - www.daliblue.com

[pinion31]

Hey Everyone,

I am just looking for some feedback regarding the content of my site. What pieces do you think are better and what seem weak? Anything you particularly like or don't like? Be Honest Please. I am open to suggestions. I am an aspiring artist looking for a first job so if you grade me from the viewpoint of a potential employer that is even better.

Thank you.

Portfolio at Dali Blue

[Diegio]

Your first message on game artist, Welcome!
Alright lets begin with the criticism

Your web design looks very unprofessional, it looks like you just took 5 minutes time to put everything together.
Just a blue background.
I would Highly recommend to change it, in a neutral color or something.
Next thing: The fonts are just too "regular", use another font (something more stylized).
Although, you've got some nice models over there !
I just don't like to see an unprofessional website with good models, that just doesn't look "right".

[laughing_bun]

I like some of your content. but please never save your pictures as .gif the football player one looks so ugly because of that. Overall you have some decent stuff. IF you don't have web design skills, atleast use a nice color scheme, the blue doesn't work at all, i would go with black myself. Your site lacks focus too. Its got lots of random stuff and I Dont really know how to feel about it. If you want a game-art job tie all your pieces back to game art somehow.

[swag]

I agree with what was said above.

I highly recommend that you read this article about how to improved your portfolio:

http://www.game-artist.net/forums/sp...pels-jobs.html