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Old 09-07-2006, 02:07 PM   #11 (permalink)
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I'll take it out if you want though .
No I don't mind you having it there as it's all for the greater good
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Old 09-07-2006, 02:12 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Yes, always be specific about work that is and isn't yours. It's the respectful thing to do.

Oh, and don't let other people's judgement be an excuse for your own.
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Old 09-07-2006, 02:18 PM   #13 (permalink)
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*Salutes Thuj*
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Old 09-09-2006, 07:46 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Updated portfolio, not complete yet, but put some work into it this time, took all of the crits onboard and hopefully you'll like the design better now, let me know what you think .

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Old 09-09-2006, 09:46 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Big improvement, though I'm not too sold on the use of outter bevel around the text and graphics. While it's good to use filters, obvious filters can have a negative effect.
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Old 09-09-2006, 10:47 PM   #16 (permalink)
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I thought it was subtle enough and added a little diversity, got some more ideas, I'll try them out.
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Old 09-15-2006, 08:37 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Redesigned, bit more formal.

Made the Resume a HTML page this time, less inconvenient to view it, need to add images to the extended portfolio page and that's about it.

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Old 09-16-2006, 12:12 PM   #18 (permalink)
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love the new look . clean and straight to the point.


only comment would be the image like the sniper rifle on top o the waffle metal plate. its hard to distinguish whats gun and whats not.
Same for the baynotte on top of it texture sheet

Also think of a back button for the image. one thing i hate is having to close window for every image.
One altenative would be to open a new window that it not full size. Anyways its juste my opinion
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Old 09-16-2006, 01:12 PM   #19 (permalink)
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This is gonna sound kinda picky, but it needs addressing.
In your resume it says:
'Quote': Good verbal and written communication skills.
But if you look to the line above, you've spelt "Material", Materiel.
Picky, maybe, but good written communication skills, require correct spelling.
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Old 09-16-2006, 02:41 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Damn ye! Thanks for pointing that out, will fix it in a bit.
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