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Old 09-18-2008, 12:24 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Just redone my site recently

no www. anymore.

Portfolio : Myles Lambert
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Old 09-19-2008, 04:51 AM   #12 (permalink)
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I have a few crits.

- The sites layout and use of colors is a bit too much. It looks confusing and is not pleasant to look at (pointing at the free textures banner as an example)
- What is it exactly that you want to do? I see drawings, i see level stuff and i see photography.
Keep it limited to that which you want to do.
- The drawings look very basic and do not really say much about your skills.
Get some more complex drawings on there and only show off your best work.
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Old 09-19-2008, 02:27 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I have a few crits.

- The sites layout and use of colors is a bit too much. It looks confusing and is not pleasant to look at (pointing at the free textures banner as an example)
- What is it exactly that you want to do? I see drawings, i see level stuff and i see photography.
Keep it limited to that which you want to do.
- The drawings look very basic and do not really say much about your skills.
Get some more complex drawings on there and only show off your best work.
Hey!
Thanks, but the layout? I think it is very basic =/ Navigation at the top, links to work on the front. Sure I display a lot of mixed work on there, but why not? If you read my CV its apparent I want to be a level designer, in a few months I will have the majority of my work being levels. As for the colours, I know the main thumbnails are a mix of colours, but thatws because theres a mix of content, as soon as i have newer work the main part will be more obvious,

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Old 09-19-2008, 03:19 PM   #14 (permalink)
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I have to agree with everything Dennispls is saying.

the colours are all over the place.

I would never have that many different kind of works on my front page. Maybe give links to photography/drawing/textures, but keep your front page to level design


Keep your links all the same, but different enough so you know there links. Right now your main links are same as header, which isnt a link.

also I would work on how u present your work on main page, the way it is now its to hard to tell wat anything is unless you click.

I like the header/menu alot, just maybe give the menu some back glow to set it apart. (also would keep those colors red-white-grey)
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Old 09-20-2008, 07:54 AM   #15 (permalink)
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I have to agree with everything Dennispls is saying.

the colours are all over the place.

I would never have that many different kind of works on my front page. Maybe give links to photography/drawing/textures, but keep your front page to level design


Keep your links all the same, but different enough so you know there links. Right now your main links are same as header, which isnt a link.

also I would work on how u present your work on main page, the way it is now its to hard to tell wat anything is unless you click.

I like the header/menu alot, just maybe give the menu some back glow to set it apart. (also would keep those colors red-white-grey)
Arlright thanks a lot,
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