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Old 13-12-2011, 03:10 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Portfolio, Lars Waara, 3D-generalist

Hello guys

I really need help with my portfolio. I think my portfolio contains a bit too many pictures, but I am not sure what to ditch. So..
  1. What needs to go?
  2. What should I have at the top of the site?
  3. Is it a bad thing to be labeled a generalist, shall I focus in a more narrow field. (doing hardsurface or organic models)?

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Old 13-12-2011, 06:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Great artwork you got here.

1. The sentence welcome to my portfolio can be deleted. I think it always is a bit corny But you will have to get the opinion of more people and decide if that should be deleted or not.
2. It's not a must to have something on the top of the site, I like how you got it now with a home button on top.
3. I believe it's a good thing to be labeled as a generalist, it shows you are capable to create many different kind of 3D art and or 2D art.

A thing that is a petty is that the images pop up a bit shocking, no real problem but it would be nice if it pop upped very smoothly.

One other thing I would recommend is to let someone check your english text. For example: I have teach computer graphics. That's not correct english, it's also not clear if you mean that you have teached or still are teaching computer graphics. So to be very clear in your text you should let be checked by someone who is good in english.

Otherwise great art!
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Old 13-12-2011, 08:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for your input, and for notice my typos.

I corrected the typos and changed the corny welcome phrase to a corny welcome text about the site.
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