Game artist portfolio

r.bram · 18-11-2011, 05:55 AM

Hi there guys..this is the link to my portfolio:

RanbirBram.co.uk

please take a look and crit, your comments and views will be much appreciated.

Thanks - rocky.

joukejan · 21-11-2011, 02:48 AM

Hello Rocky

Your portfolio appears a bit messy and empty. The buildings are not a stronge piece without textures. I know it's WIP but I wouldn't present something unless it's finished. Something to take in consideration. You want to blow away your future boss.
Also the rest in the 3D section looks somewhat too simple to put in a portfolio.

Your 2D section looks pretty good I think. It seems you got a good knowledge of sketching and anatomy. The only thing is that the quality of the images are a bit blurry. Did you scan it in? Maybe taking pictures from them will get a good result depending on what camera you are able to use.

Hope this helped you to go into the right direction!

r.bram · 30-11-2011, 10:38 AM

Hello joukejan,

Thanks for having a look and letting me knw what u think.
There's some good points there that you've mentioned and will help me to improve the site.

18-11-2011, 05:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
r.bram New Member 4 - 1	Game artist portfolio Hi there guys..this is the link to my portfolio: RanbirBram.co.uk please take a look and crit, your comments and views will be much appreciated. Thanks - rocky.

21-11-2011, 02:48 AM	#2 (permalink)
joukejan Forum Leader 658 - 161	Hello Rocky Your portfolio appears a bit messy and empty. The buildings are not a stronge piece without textures. I know it's WIP but I wouldn't present something unless it's finished. Something to take in consideration. You want to blow away your future boss. Also the rest in the 3D section looks somewhat too simple to put in a portfolio. Your 2D section looks pretty good I think. It seems you got a good knowledge of sketching and anatomy. The only thing is that the quality of the images are a bit blurry. Did you scan it in? Maybe taking pictures from them will get a good result depending on what camera you are able to use. Hope this helped you to go into the right direction! __________________ http://www.joukejantimmermans.nl

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30-11-2011, 10:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
r.bram New Member 4 - 1	Hello joukejan, Thanks for having a look and letting me knw what u think. There's some good points there that you've mentioned and will help me to improve the site.