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Old 24-06-2011, 02:24 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Andy Henderson - Audio - 3D - IT Specialist

Recorgasm Production
Looking for paid work please.

Andy Henderson
Andy@recorgasm.com
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Old 24-06-2011, 03:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome to the forums Merk.

I have to be very critical towards your portfolio. It's very unstructural and far different (unfortunately not in a good way) from what I have seen before.
Let's start with the layout, it is pretty busy and filled. You got pictures on the left side and on the right side the portfolio reel and in between you got some info about you which is pretty limited.
Then your profile picture, haha I could laugh about it because it is so unprofessional. Don't think people won't look at how their future employee looks like. It's very important they get the chance to see who they maybe will hire. I assume you don't have a yellow colored face

Next is the color use and seperation by colors. To be honest it looks like a cheap website of 10 years ago, don't want to be rude but the colors don't match with eachother and really give it that cheap appeal to it. Try other colorschemes, just play with that untill it feals right. Al those different colors also help to make it all very busy and filled.

So to sum this up, I would advice you to make it more structural, use an other colorscheme and organize it better. So have a page with information about you and a page with your work. Also a resume would be nice and helpfull to put on your website.
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Old 26-06-2011, 02:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I updated it a little

Can you tell me what you mean by "seperation by colors"? I went ahead and tied the colors together a little but I just wanted to make sure you knew that my studio is red for real. I didn't use any color correction on the images until now.
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Old 26-06-2011, 04:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I didn't mean the colors of the pictures. What I mean is the different colors on the website itself. The background is a huge picture with blue and green colors, also you have a banner with blue and green not the same blue and green. And then you also have a box behind the about andy information which has the colors white and blue, again not the same blue. So all in all, the amount of colors you use are too much, at least for the page itself.
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updated again

Here is the lazy link Recorgasm Production
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