Competition #15 - wvanh

wvanh · 08-29-2008, 01:34 PM

So, here's my first bit of concept work. I'm going for the mangy hotel room overlooking the government building, somewhat like in day of the jackal though perhaps with more preparation. I think I'll add newspaper clippings to the wall. I also definitely need to work on the lighting.

heavyness · 08-29-2008, 02:24 PM

cool backstory and theme... that will add a lot to the final piece.

CGmonkey · 08-29-2008, 03:31 PM

oh definitely a cool idea!

A chair around the sniper rifle, trash, cigarette buts, dirt everywhere to make it look like he's been sitting there for awhile... watching... lurking

Maybe you want to get the "quick in, quick out" kind of sniper?

Good Luck!
~B

wvanh · 08-29-2008, 06:23 PM

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Originally Posted by CGmonkey

oh definitely a cool idea!

A chair around the sniper rifle, trash, cigarette buts, dirt everywhere to make it look like he's been sitting there for awhile... watching... lurking

Maybe you want to get the "quick in, quick out" kind of sniper?

Good Luck!
~B

The chair and cigarette buts were certainly on the to-do list, I think I'll add a table lamp too to add some warm color to the scene and to give the ashtray some detail. I'm not sure I want to make the room look too dirty, more old fashioned and decrepit is really the look I'm going for.

CGmonkey · 08-30-2008, 01:17 PM

Then you have to have the wallpaper peeling off and stuff like that. I can't wait to see this one coming together.

Instead of having the warm light, I would've used the the warmth of the sun coming from the window and having the lamps in the room cold (to symbolize the coldness of the killer contra the warmth of the world).

Anyway get cracking!!

08-29-2008, 01:34 PM	#1 (permalink)
wvanh New Artist 14 - 1	Competition #15 - wvanh So, here's my first bit of concept work. I'm going for the mangy hotel room overlooking the government building, somewhat like in day of the jackal though perhaps with more preparation. I think I'll add newspaper clippings to the wall. I also definitely need to work on the lighting.

08-29-2008, 02:24 PM	#2 (permalink)
heavyness Game-Artist.net Staff 64 - 5	cool backstory and theme... that will add a lot to the final piece. __________________ heavyness.com game artist

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08-29-2008, 03:31 PM	#3 (permalink)
CGmonkey New Artist 20 - 0	oh definitely a cool idea! A chair around the sniper rifle, trash, cigarette buts, dirt everywhere to make it look like he's been sitting there for awhile... watching... lurking Maybe you want to get the "quick in, quick out" kind of sniper? Good Luck! ~B

08-30-2008, 01:17 PM	#5 (permalink)
CGmonkey New Artist 20 - 0	Then you have to have the wallpaper peeling off and stuff like that. I can't wait to see this one coming together. Instead of having the warm light, I would've used the the warmth of the sun coming from the window and having the lamps in the room cold (to symbolize the coldness of the killer contra the warmth of the world). Anyway get cracking!!