Wooden Cart

TheCorey · 04-04-2008, 09:32 AM

Get in the mood for the spring with this shiny wooden cart!

Comes with 3 different objects:

- a bag of grain
- box of TNT
- A pot with flowers

The Cart model uses an additional normal for extra detail.

Craig Lewis · 04-04-2008, 10:41 AM

To be honest, I don't think the cart needs the sign on it saying 'wooden cart'. I think it's pretty self explanatory what it is

TheCorey · 04-04-2008, 11:06 AM

lol yes I know. I wasn't sure what to put on though. Any suggestions?

benclark · 04-04-2008, 11:17 AM

look up real wooden carts and see what they have on them, I would suggest the name of a company or merchant service depending on the context of your model

The texture is screaming out for an ambient occlusion pass. And some more variation in the wood, some subtle greens reds and browns would really help it look less repeated

Also the floor of the cart is about 10times more saturated than anything else in your texture so it looks odd

TheCorey · 04-04-2008, 12:13 PM

Finally some real critics!

I'll see what I can do. Maybe I should have posted this in the WIP section though

04-04-2008, 09:32 AM	#1 (permalink)
TheCorey Amateur Artist 341 - 289	Wooden Cart Get in the mood for the spring with this shiny wooden cart! Comes with 3 different objects: - a bag of grain - box of TNT - A pot with flowers The Cart model uses an additional normal for extra detail. Attached Images

04-04-2008, 10:41 AM	#2 (permalink)
Craig Lewis Industry Artist 955 - 206	To be honest, I don't think the cart needs the sign on it saying 'wooden cart'. I think it's pretty self explanatory what it is __________________

04-04-2008, 11:17 AM	#4 (permalink)
benclark Industry Artist 2,317 - 531	look up real wooden carts and see what they have on them, I would suggest the name of a company or merchant service depending on the context of your model The texture is screaming out for an ambient occlusion pass. And some more variation in the wood, some subtle greens reds and browns would really help it look less repeated Also the floor of the cart is about 10times more saturated than anything else in your texture so it looks odd __________________ www.benjaminclark.net My Sketchbook

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04-04-2008, 11:06 AM	#3 (permalink)
TheCorey Amateur Artist 341 - 289	lol yes I know. I wasn't sure what to put on though. Any suggestions?

04-04-2008, 12:13 PM	#5 (permalink)
TheCorey Amateur Artist 341 - 289	Finally some real critics! I'll see what I can do. Maybe I should have posted this in the WIP section though