Rock 'n' roller Coaster Realtime

GadgetRT · 10-03-2010, 04:47 AM

Hi ! this a quick scene i made for my portfolio I used 3dsmax XoLiuL's viewport Shader to render this comp and add some editing on Ps CS4

Thank you Xoliul For your great shader!

--Victor Lukenga--

Cyphris · 10-03-2010, 10:28 AM

Hey there, nice stuff. However I think the main problem here is composition, like the first image, I couldn't make sense of it, there was lines going all over the place. If I didn't know it was a rollercoaster I would have thought it was just a bunch of abstract art, mashed together.

Other than that, nice work.

GadgetRT · 10-03-2010, 10:41 AM

thank you !

Yes is purely Abstract its the same piece of coaster that i copied all around

10-03-2010, 10:28 AM	#2 (permalink)
Cyphris Frequenter 120 - 16	Hey there, nice stuff. However I think the main problem here is composition, like the first image, I couldn't make sense of it, there was lines going all over the place. If I didn't know it was a rollercoaster I would have thought it was just a bunch of abstract art, mashed together. Other than that, nice work. __________________ Currently working for: Massive - A Ubisoft Studio Blog: http://swedishgeek.com Portfolio: http://christofferradsby.com/portfolio/

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10-03-2010, 10:41 AM	#3 (permalink)
GadgetRT New Member 2 - 0	thank you ! Yes is purely Abstract its the same piece of coaster that i copied all around