Harpy

[abraldes]

Hello, i would like to know your opinion on my character: Harpy.

Software : XSI, ZBrush, CS3

Greetings,
Juan Carlos Abraldes
Blog:
ABRALDES
Short Film Demo Reel:
Video3D - Corto Animación

Concept:
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Videos Concept Harpy:
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Wire:
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Info Selection:
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[AlexanderSmith]

I believe forums rules require a thumbnail image for Finished Pieces threads. You'll need to add one to keep the thread.

[Tiros]

What Alexander said is indeed true, if you don't add one the thread will be deleted.

Anyhow, it seems like a really nice model, although it's quite hard to tell how the final outcome were as the renders are dark with a dark background, would you post a new shot with some brighter renders and a brighter background? something like #323232 is usually quite a good choice for a background-colour

Cheers!

[benclark]

I dont really understand your UV map. You have given her entire face the same texture space as one of her toes

[abraldes]

Pardon by my bad English.
One A question, ¿Can I as now include the image of miniature for this thread?

[Tiros]

While editing your first post, simply attatch a 100x100 px image with the "Manage Attachments" button

And now that Ben said it, didn't really cross my mind earlier.. but is that small blob in the middle of the pice in the upper left corner her face?

/edit: thinking about it, it seems like you might've used an automatic unwrap, no? If that's the case, you really ought to add a seam along the back of her neck, running up her head. While being covered by the hair that area won't be visible and is really much less important than the face.

That should help the automatic unwrap to properly unwrap the head. I know you already textured it, but showing it off with such an unwrap where "her entire face has the size of one of her toes" isn't really going to help you I'm afraid.

Cheers

[abraldes]

Ok, thanks in the following one post I will put correctly an image for the thread.

textures of diffuse and normal map

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[Tiros]

Ah, seems we missunderstood you, we thought the nose and mouth were her whole head

Well, looks fine now though.

Cheers!

[irishlostboy]

the hips, ass and thighs are too masculine. the groin area looks a bit odd shaped as well. harpies whould be both attractive and repulsive. at the moment it looks a little like boobs on a man's frame.