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Old 07-01-2008, 06:52 AM   #11 (permalink)
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We should avoid sentences such as "Awesome model " and etc if we want to be constructive but what could I comment/criticize really

I think aswell it's really nice not to mention professional... An aim for me

Good job !
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Old 07-01-2008, 07:21 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Awesome model!!

*mumbles* looks better in modo

Good job Ben, very proud of you. You've grown up into a real artist.
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Old 07-01-2008, 07:44 AM   #13 (permalink)
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He's looking good, man. I was dubious of the cloth folds in the sculpt at first but they've come out really nicely in the normal map.

Somehow the nice forms on the high poly didn't carry over - the change in hair style makes me think that you redid the head to be a younger dude?

His hairline is oddly sharp around the front, and I feel that his hair should creep a little further forwards at the top of his sideburns, too. A little more pronounced colour variation in the skin (especially the hands) might be nice.

Still, though, small crits on a really nicely executed model. Good work
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Old 07-02-2008, 07:17 AM   #14 (permalink)
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This is one hell of a solid model!
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Old 07-02-2008, 11:11 AM   #15 (permalink)
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He looks a little strung out or something. Been doing too many uppers. The outfit looks great.
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Old 07-03-2008, 03:34 AM   #16 (permalink)
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looking good, I like how the clothing turned out. for some reason the face didn't carry over too well from the high though, dunno if that's intentional or just the maya viewport or whatever. I prefer the high poly one a bit, it's got more character to it. not that the low one is looking bad, the other one's just a tad nicer.
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Old 07-03-2008, 05:47 AM   #17 (permalink)
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very nice model, except for the hands, the look weird posed (lowpoly) especially the hand at the helmet.
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Old 07-03-2008, 12:05 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Looks great man.
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Old 07-08-2008, 01:11 AM   #19 (permalink)
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i like this one alot. the only thing i think isn't right is that his g-suit should be tight on his legs, it looks like he is wearing a pair of baggy pants or something.

that's my crit on this, everything else is perfect in my opinion.
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Old 07-08-2008, 04:36 AM   #20 (permalink)
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Dude that's freaking awesome! It looks G-R-E-A-T! Keep it coming
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