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Old 12-13-2007, 04:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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(never used this forum and it ask me about thumbnail, so if i did something wrong here please tell me)

Hey guys, first time posting something here and i would like to share a test i've donne for the company Playlore, they didn't contact me yet about the test but is was a really nice practice for me, hope you like it.



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Large images in my blog.

C&C are welcome, tks.
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Old 12-13-2007, 04:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very solid work man! Good luck on the test, hopefully they'll get back to ya soon. I can't imagine they'd have a problem with it

From lookin at your pictures on the blog I did spot a couple things to touch up, or try on your next project. I think it wouldn't hurt to make the specular a little more obvious on the models. They seem a little plain without a little more obvious highlights. Not a huge deal tho

Last thing I noticed were the stones on the backs of the pillar. They could use some more definition, looks as if they are fake rocks you see on some buildings. In comparison with the statues, they could use some more subtle details.

Anyway those statue models are really nice, great job. Hope you'll hang around here, so we can see some more work from you.
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Old 12-13-2007, 04:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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start a new thread, repost all your images and add your thumbnail image as an attachment this time, once its up one of the mods will delete this thread I dont think you can add one after you have posted the thread
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Old 12-13-2007, 04:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I've added the thumbnail for you, so don't worry about the new thread

In the future, just upload your thumbnail with the "Manage Attachment" button. It is there when you start the thread or edit it.
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Old 12-13-2007, 06:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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retardedmonkey: hey man, tks for the comment and tips, yeah next project i'll take care about these things, i've a lot to learn, hope next be better. tks for the thumbnail .

Alchemist101: tks man, next time tks retardedmonkey i get it and now i know what to do .
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Old 12-13-2007, 06:51 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Sweet little environment you got there, love it

(nice to see another brazilian here~)
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Old 12-13-2007, 09:53 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I think this looks awesome.

The only thing I think it could possibly need to really finish it off is a treeline in the skybox. Black tree's as silhouettes and a deep blue for the sky (with stars, perhaps? ).

Cracking work though mate. Really like this.
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Old 12-14-2007, 04:33 AM   #8 (permalink)
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*runs away in shame

I didnt know we could do that!

Nice work. I really like the statue, the amount of colour you have squeezed into the diffuse is brilliant and its very nicely lit and presented - something you dont often see on art tests that people post online

good luck with the job
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Old 12-14-2007, 07:43 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Minotaur0: hi man, tks for the comment. (another one .

glynnsmith: tks man, yeah i think it will be better with this, soon i'll try that and post the result here, tks.

Alchemist101: tks man, really appreciate that.
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Old 12-14-2007, 07:49 AM   #10 (permalink)
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I hope that statue doesnt come alive. Id hate to be his food. Great job on the modeling. I would give you five stars if I could.
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