zapp - rocketeeer!

achmedthesnake · 01-01-2007, 11:53 PM

hey - this guy was created for the cgchat's comp half a year ago ( it was late, but i wanted to finish him) - he is about 5000 tris and consists of two 512's

crits and comments most appreciated...

phrEEk · 01-04-2007, 08:37 AM

hey achmedthesnake great work,
i think the model is great and the proportions are pretty cool,
but you could add more depth to the textures,
(like you began to do on his coat and rocket)
like paint shadows and high lights with dodge/burn tool,
and maybe bake an ambient occlusion map,
it would look awesome once done,

i also think you should change the color of the pants folds (crotch area) to a colored one, i mean not black,
cause right now its the same color as the cloth seams

anyway its a nice work

achmedthesnake · 01-04-2007, 11:21 PM

cheers phreek,

yeah the pants are looking a bit dull compared - i'll try to spice it up when i've got some time....

ShaDoW · 01-05-2007, 01:17 PM

Yeah I would really bring some more shadows into his clothing.

Also, maybe you could give him one of those badges for his coat, with something funny on it like a big rocket.

01-01-2007, 11:53 PM	#1 (permalink)
achmedthesnake Senior Artist 135 - 5	zapp - rocketeeer! hey - this guy was created for the cgchat's comp half a year ago ( it was late, but i wanted to finish him) - he is about 5000 tris and consists of two 512's crits and comments most appreciated... Attached Thumbnails

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01-04-2007, 08:37 AM	#2 (permalink)
phrEEk University Student 24 - 3	hey achmedthesnake great work, i think the model is great and the proportions are pretty cool, but you could add more depth to the textures, (like you began to do on his coat and rocket) like paint shadows and high lights with dodge/burn tool, and maybe bake an ambient occlusion map, it would look awesome once done, i also think you should change the color of the pants folds (crotch area) to a colored one, i mean not black, cause right now its the same color as the cloth seams anyway its a nice work

01-04-2007, 11:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
achmedthesnake Senior Artist 135 - 5	cheers phreek, yeah the pants are looking a bit dull compared - i'll try to spice it up when i've got some time....

01-05-2007, 01:17 PM	#4 (permalink)
ShaDoW Artist 47 - 2	Yeah I would really bring some more shadows into his clothing. Also, maybe you could give him one of those badges for his coat, with something funny on it like a big rocket.