Mini Street Scene

[Deathmonkey]

This was done in 3dsmax. Let me know what you think!

Saludos,

DM

ps: Merry Christmas

[requiem2d]

Could you please tell us more about the piece, i.e. what goals you have for it, engine limitations, etc? Criticism without context is worthless Thanks in advance.

[Deathmonkey]

I am not going to use any of it in game. It is the first scene I made in 3Dsmax and I wanted to see how good I am in creating a somewhat detailed texture for it. I did not care about polycount or any of that. I used a 2048x2048 uvmap for the street and the buildings. The trashcans are on a separat uvmap (1024x1024).

Hope that helps a little...sorry for not putting all the info when I was posting!!!

Saludos,

DM

[micster]

Be mindful about your scale. I just had an Art Director tell me how important scale is to an environment artist. I think your textures are fairly convincing, they could use some more "ware and tear". When observing your scene at first I think that the sign on the corner is too small/short. In actuallity I think several different pieces are just slightly off. I would take a closer look at the relationship between:

1. trashcans
2. signpost
3. firescape
4. water drain pipe

These four items are what my eye latches onto and they don't seem to exactly all fit together. I was told that inserting a human character just for reference could help.

Hope that critique doesn't sound too hard, keep up the good work.

[Deathmonkey]

Thanks for your comment!! Oh and it doesnt sound to hard...thats what we are here for or...to learn what we can make better!!!

I will try to fix the things you have mentioned!!!

Saludos,

DM

[Dennispls]

I don't want to be picky but where is the grate underneath the pipe? i mean the water has to go somewhere
Everything else looks ok to me

[AndyTheGameNerd]

Nothing To Complain About. It looks Great!

[CaptainCock]

Good scene but what i am missing is one of that big green/metal Dumpsters...
Also you could make the yellow stripes on the right site a bit darker and
dirtyer (to make more contrast).
Maybe some leafes here and there over the floor and some modeled
pieces of newspaper which are "flying/rolling"(have no good word atm)
along the street. That would add more atmosphere to the scene.

I hope that helped you

[Retro-Cow]

I like it, but like micster said some more wear and tear would go better with the scene. This street/alley or whatever looks like it's isn't very well maintained. Garbage cans could be a little more beat up as well as the drain pipe could have some more rust. But thats just my opinion. Hope this helped

[xxrobustchumxx]

Nice i like it alot