Competition #8 - sethodie - Page 3

sethodie · 04-12-2007, 02:40 AM

Thank you very much for all crits. I have to think over my project

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sethodie · 04-13-2007, 07:19 AM

I have returned to my old long version, trying to combine it with new back. It needs some optimalisation and rebuilding.
Please let me know what do you think about it. Maybe back wheels are too big?

UnsteadyTeddy · 04-13-2007, 07:34 AM

I'm not quite sure if the back bumper is working on this. Maybe it should be some kind of scoop or ramming device!
If you got some more tris maybe you could make the back of the wheels more realistic, instead of just capping the end of where it meets the axle, as it would be quite a visible area ingame.
I like the exhausts

UnsteadyTeddy · 04-13-2007, 07:38 AM

Just a few more ideas:

andrei313 · 04-13-2007, 10:29 AM

Some good suggestions there. The model looks better now

The hatch looks cool... but it's too centered... maybe it would look better if you place it to the side... that will also brake the symmetry... which is always a good thing. I like the wheels, I'm not sure if making them smaller would make it better

maybe you can do again some renders with both versions... it was easier to pick that way

retardedmonkey · 04-13-2007, 10:43 AM

Hmm I like the front tires without the wheel wells, because they are smaller with the wheel wells and that makes it look kind of odd with the large back tires. Unless you can make the front tires a little bigger so they would go up inside the wheel wells, might even out the front and back tires more.

sethodie · 04-17-2007, 03:36 PM

Thanks for all crits

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Times is passing very fast so I have decided to finish mesh and start texturing. Gun is now the only missing part (maybe i will also add hinges near hatches). Tomorrow I am starting uv mapping.

And two quick renderings (modo made them really fast

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andrei313 · 04-18-2007, 04:22 AM

Awesome model. You really need to start working on the texture so you have time for all the details this vehicle deserves

I want to see this finished!

WesleyTack · 04-18-2007, 04:44 AM

yea, great model, whats the triangle count (looks more than 4000 to me).
Hope you get time to finish it, cause it will be cool once completed!

ShoT · 04-18-2007, 09:05 AM

Nice...

Polak?

04-13-2007, 10:29 AM	#25 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,711 - 187	Some good suggestions there. The model looks better now The hatch looks cool... but it's too centered... maybe it would look better if you place it to the side... that will also brake the symmetry... which is always a good thing. I like the wheels, I'm not sure if making them smaller would make it better maybe you can do again some renders with both versions... it was easier to pick that way __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

04-13-2007, 10:43 AM	#26 (permalink)
retardedmonkey Senior Artist 949 - 136	Hmm I like the front tires without the wheel wells, because they are smaller with the wheel wells and that makes it look kind of odd with the large back tires. Unless you can make the front tires a little bigger so they would go up inside the wheel wells, might even out the front and back tires more. __________________ Portfolio

04-17-2007, 03:36 PM	#27 (permalink)
sethodie Artist 81 - 15	Thanks for all crits . Times is passing very fast so I have decided to finish mesh and start texturing. Gun is now the only missing part (maybe i will also add hinges near hatches). Tomorrow I am starting uv mapping. And two quick renderings (modo made them really fast ) Last edited by sethodie; 04-17-2007 at 04:08 PM.

04-18-2007, 04:22 AM	#28 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,711 - 187	Awesome model. You really need to start working on the texture so you have time for all the details this vehicle deserves I want to see this finished! __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

04-18-2007, 04:44 AM	#29 (permalink)
WesleyTack Industry Artist 400 - 27	yea, great model, whats the triangle count (looks more than 4000 to me). Hope you get time to finish it, cause it will be cool once completed! __________________ www.wesleytack.com www.off-limits.be www.dice.se

04-12-2007, 02:40 AM	#21 (permalink)
sethodie Artist 81 - 15	Thank you very much for all crits. I have to think over my project .

04-13-2007, 07:19 AM	#22 (permalink)
sethodie Artist 81 - 15	I have returned to my old long version, trying to combine it with new back. It needs some optimalisation and rebuilding. Please let me know what do you think about it. Maybe back wheels are too big?

04-18-2007, 09:05 AM	#30 (permalink)
ShoT Senior Artist 159 - 8	Nice... Polak? __________________

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