Competition #8 - sethodie

[sethodie]

Thanks DeV .
I will try to make it looking better. Now I want to add gun on top.

[sethodie]

I have decided to move gun to the back and make this hatch bigger. Inside I want to place seat for a gunner. It is still some kind of 3d sketch, so a lot of details is not well modeled. I have also decided to make the whole model wider - I didn't liked its proportions it was too thin in my opinion.

Here are two screens of my 3d sketch:




And rebuilded and rescaled body of final model (I want to play a little with front wheel covers. Maybe I will also remove some polys.).

[UnsteadyTeddy]

You could try removing the front 3 or 4 rows or polys on the wheel arch and see how that looks
Love the style of this thing. Can't wait to see a texture on it.

[sethodie]

Originally Posted by UnsteadyTeddy

You could try removing the front 3 or 4 rows or polys on the wheel arch and see how that looks

Please let me know which polys you where talking about. I want to optimise front wheel covers, but they are very curved and I am not sure if I can remove a lot of polys.

[sethodie]

I have remodeled almost all the model. Now I have three versions and I am not quite sure wich I should develope. Maybe you can help me, please?
I want to add more details and maybe make interior. First version has 2600 triangles, so there is some place for additions. Bumpers and exhaust are not yet fitted to car (they simply hoover in space).



version with bigger rear wheels


and jetisioned one

[WesleyTack]

http://www.yoop.pl/car/car-11.jpg

This is the best version imHo

[retardedmonkey]

Yeah I gotta agree with Wesley, the first pic is the best one. The back suspension....and just the back looks better in that one to me. The one with the jet's are just overdoing it in my opinion, doesnt fit the car...truck thing....

The only thing that I would add to the first image is maybe the bigger tires of the second image, just a bit smaller. But I like the way the bigger tires in the back look...

[Schmung]

I liked the longer ones as they remind me somewhat of Fallout, which can only be a good thing. Maybe use the one Wes pointed out in conjunction with the longer chassis so the bodywork is partially cut away and there's something between those two exhausts?

[UnsteadyTeddy]

ahh crap i forgot to crit the last set of images :/
pained red is the polys i would have removed, leaving some of the wheel exposed.
I must say, i think the longer vehicle is a much better design than the shorter newer ones.

[andrei313]

Yeah, I must go with the 1st one too. It looks better but as UnsteadyTeddy said... a longer vehicle would look better, this way it feels like a toy. I like what you did there in the back, it looks great... but maybe you can make it a little longer but still keep that there.
One small crit about the blades in the front... They are pointing upwards which gives the impression that the people that are in your way are pushed on the hood... I'd want them to go under the car so maybe it looks better with that thing pointing down... or in a straight position.
I miss that hatch on the top :|