Competition #8 - andrei313 - Page 7

andrei313 · 04-28-2007, 08:42 AM

I think I looked at this too much today and I don't know what I'm doing anymore... I'm starting to see your point though... Is this better?

There are the same details there but without so much rust... and all that. It's a viewport screen btw. Unfortunately I collapsed the grudge on the windows and the other stuff so I have to work a lot more if I need to get back to what I had before in those areas... although I still like it like it is there

I'm going to fix the black frames as well... this is the only thing I'm sure of when I look at it

Thanks again for the help

aegix · 04-28-2007, 09:53 AM

I think the crates on top should be a lighter colour so they 'pop' more. Right now it looks like they're almost the same colour as the body.

petrol · 04-29-2007, 03:27 PM

The wheels at the moment are a problem for me... they seem quite blurry, and seem quite shiny for rusty old wheels. Also the rust itself (just on the wheels) looks too saturated in colour. I prefer how you had the metal before generally to be honest - on the bumper especially, it looked awesome before. You've done a lovely job with the rest, it looks very professionally done. If you have time I would seriously consider going back over the wheels and bumper though, it would finish it off nicely in my opinion.

andrei313 · 05-02-2007, 05:53 AM

I tried to cover as much as I could from the feedback you guys gave me... and in the time I had left I manage to do this:

I like what I have here... I think this is my best vehicle so far... Maybe because it's the second... I modeled a tractor last year and I didn't texture it yet... I think I will next week... STALKER style of course

Anyway... that's the feedback and help. I'm glad I finished it, last week I was beginning to think I won't be able to make a texture

RappyBMX · 05-06-2007, 02:36 PM

man your the best... i love your work

...
the van looks grate... i like it

keep up the good work...
hope you win

:P

andrei313 · 05-06-2007, 02:37 PM

Thank you

petrol · 05-06-2007, 03:02 PM

I havent commented since you changed those things before the final entry - but I must say those changes really completed the model. The front fender definately looks better back in a less rusty chrome. Sweet job man.

andrei313 · 05-06-2007, 03:05 PM

The comments helped a lot. I was in a hurry and I didn't know what look good and what looked bad

So thanks again for the feedback guys

04-28-2007, 08:42 AM	#61 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,711 - 187	I think I looked at this too much today and I don't know what I'm doing anymore... I'm starting to see your point though... Is this better? There are the same details there but without so much rust... and all that. It's a viewport screen btw. Unfortunately I collapsed the grudge on the windows and the other stuff so I have to work a lot more if I need to get back to what I had before in those areas... although I still like it like it is there I'm going to fix the black frames as well... this is the only thing I'm sure of when I look at it Thanks again for the help __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

04-28-2007, 09:53 AM	#62 (permalink)
aegix Artist 64 - 2	I think the crates on top should be a lighter colour so they 'pop' more. Right now it looks like they're almost the same colour as the body. __________________ www.eatpolys.com

05-02-2007, 05:53 AM	#64 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,711 - 187	I tried to cover as much as I could from the feedback you guys gave me... and in the time I had left I manage to do this: I like what I have here... I think this is my best vehicle so far... Maybe because it's the second... I modeled a tractor last year and I didn't texture it yet... I think I will next week... STALKER style of course Anyway... that's the feedback and help. I'm glad I finished it, last week I was beginning to think I won't be able to make a texture __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

05-06-2007, 02:36 PM	#65 (permalink)
RappyBMX New Artist 9 - 4	man your the best... i love your work ... the van looks grate... i like it keep up the good work... hope you win :P __________________ http://www.RappyBMX.110mb.com Last edited by RappyBMX; 05-06-2007 at 02:42 PM.

05-06-2007, 02:37 PM	#66 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,711 - 187	Thank you __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

04-29-2007, 03:27 PM	#63 (permalink)
petrol Industry Artist 155 - 2	The wheels at the moment are a problem for me... they seem quite blurry, and seem quite shiny for rusty old wheels. Also the rust itself (just on the wheels) looks too saturated in colour. I prefer how you had the metal before generally to be honest - on the bumper especially, it looked awesome before. You've done a lovely job with the rest, it looks very professionally done. If you have time I would seriously consider going back over the wheels and bumper though, it would finish it off nicely in my opinion.

05-06-2007, 03:02 PM	#67 (permalink)
petrol Industry Artist 155 - 2	I havent commented since you changed those things before the final entry - but I must say those changes really completed the model. The front fender definately looks better back in a less rusty chrome. Sweet job man.

05-06-2007, 03:05 PM	#68 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,711 - 187	The comments helped a lot. I was in a hurry and I didn't know what look good and what looked bad So thanks again for the feedback guys __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

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