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Old 01-20-2007, 05:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi guys, this is my crate





Tris - 196

C&C are most welcome

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Old 01-20-2007, 06:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Stylize, I really like the concept/shape. Texture has a good foundation to it yet you'll want to beef up on those details. Not sure if the white wear & tear is from the diffuse having the same spots white? If so, you might want to consider making it more metal like (different shades of gray) and then copy pasting that to the specular while increasing it's birghtness. Keypad could use some numbers, box some writing and the bake might have been a tad too strong. Keep up the good work
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Old 01-20-2007, 07:31 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah cool design. The only thing i could see is the a bit blurry parts on your texture. Or it is maybe the render ?
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Old 01-20-2007, 08:34 AM   #4 (permalink)
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The transition from the hinge to the lid looks a bit dodgey, I think the lid part just needs a bit of roughing up there where it meets the hinge.
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Old 01-20-2007, 05:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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requiem2d: those white spots is from diffuse. It suppose to be wear and tear, but it doesn't turn out be be so good haha. i will work on that. thanks buddy

Nysuatro: thanks for the comments. Ya i realize the texture is kinda blur. I'm working on a better texture. Hopefully it will turn out better

Pankake: i didnt realize it after you commented on it. thanks pal. i will work on it.

thanks for commenting on my work
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Old 01-20-2007, 06:04 PM   #6 (permalink)
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awesome ;D
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