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Old 01-15-2007, 08:06 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Looking cool so far. The only thing I've noticed, is that the text seems to look a little out of place of the texture sheet (it might look alright on the model, but there isn't a clear shot of it so I couldn't say). Perhaps you should lower the opacity on it, or darken it a bit.
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Old 01-16-2007, 12:46 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Nice diffuse metal, the spec really needs to come through in order to make this piece work though. How's everything looking with the normal applied? Look forward to more
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Old 01-16-2007, 04:06 PM   #13 (permalink)
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the thing i like is ur normal map,
i can't wait for the final render
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Old 01-17-2007, 02:33 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Kathar: Yeah the text could probably be darker.

Thnx , the spec isnt quite doing what i want for now, but here's the diffuse + normal.

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Old 01-17-2007, 02:44 PM   #15 (permalink)
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I think this looks way better than the first color map. Good job so far!
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Old 01-20-2007, 03:59 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Psyk0, I really like what you've got going with your piece so far. Maybe some more detail from your high baked into your low would help, as you mentioned earlier. Honestly, I should take my own advice in that department, or at least do some post bake normal work.

Anyway, good job so far, maybe some more detail, color map wise wouldn't hurt. Colors work pretty well, but add some labels, stickers, other paint stuff and whatnot. Post your spec soon, I'd like to see how it's turning out!
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Old 01-20-2007, 06:09 AM   #17 (permalink)
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I thnk you've done a good job uptil this point. If you're not going to do any other major things before submitting, make sure you have a strong beauty render, you have the normals to do so and it will surely give you an advantage in a 200 poly comp. Good work
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Old 01-20-2007, 07:29 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Nice work

Just 2 things that came in my mind

- I am not a fan of the red color on the side
- It has a blurry look. Maybe sharpen it at some places. Maybe the scratches.
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Old 01-22-2007, 03:59 AM   #19 (permalink)
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i like the paint wear and tear part. nice
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