Pankake

Pankake · 05-01-2007, 03:11 AM

Here's my submission, it didn't take me very long so I may go for a second, seeing as this is very generic, and everyone else's ones seem so imaginative, it makes me feel boring

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It's all hand painted etc, Inspiration behind it was it being a physics object in a game, or a bit of cover etc.

Diffuse texture

Wire frame

EDIT: Forgot to post the wire...

andrei313 · 05-01-2007, 03:27 AM

Good start. My only crit would be about the thing that wraps it... it looks good but somehow it doesn't fit with the rest, and the shadow is too big... It is to close to the box to look like that and I think this gives the whole crate a non-realistic look.

Pankake · 05-01-2007, 03:32 AM

I know the shadow is too big, it just helps the strap 'stand out' if it looks bad though, I'll dull it down some

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andrei313 · 05-01-2007, 03:34 AM

Why not make the strap bigger and cooler

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Pankake · 05-01-2007, 03:38 AM

Sounds good to me!

Any suggestions on cool?

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Pankake · 05-01-2007, 04:18 AM

Updated it a bit:

MagNet · 06-01-2007, 10:39 AM

The crate looks pretty nice but the strap still stands a bit out. Maybe try removing the outline.

Pankake · 06-01-2007, 01:35 PM

Okay, cool, I'll desaturate the outline a bit, and see how that looks, can't right now, bit busy with work, but I will later tonight

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Pankake · 17-01-2007, 07:33 AM

In-Game/Beauty

112 Triangles

Diffuse
http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...ion/crated.jpg
Normal
http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...ion/crateb.jpg
Specular
http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...ion/crates.jpg
Wire
http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...crate_wire.jpg

doylle · 17-01-2007, 07:37 AM

nice piece. I haven't seen a crate glow like that IRL, but it looks cool

. What engine is that?

05-01-2007, 03:11 AM	#1 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,733 - 429	Pankake Here's my submission, it didn't take me very long so I may go for a second, seeing as this is very generic, and everyone else's ones seem so imaginative, it makes me feel boring . It's all hand painted etc, Inspiration behind it was it being a physics object in a game, or a bit of cover etc. Diffuse texture Wire frame EDIT: Forgot to post the wire... __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio Last edited by Pankake; 05-01-2007 at 03:24 AM.

05-01-2007, 03:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,726 - 327	Good start. My only crit would be about the thing that wraps it... it looks good but somehow it doesn't fit with the rest, and the shadow is too big... It is to close to the box to look like that and I think this gives the whole crate a non-realistic look. __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

05-01-2007, 03:32 AM	#3 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,733 - 429	I know the shadow is too big, it just helps the strap 'stand out' if it looks bad though, I'll dull it down some . __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio

05-01-2007, 03:34 AM	#4 (permalink)
andrei313 loves polygons 1,726 - 327	Why not make the strap bigger and cooler ? __________________ http://www.andrei313.com

05-01-2007, 03:38 AM	#5 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,733 - 429	Sounds good to me! Any suggestions on cool? . __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio

05-01-2007, 04:18 AM	#6 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,733 - 429	Updated it a bit: __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio

06-01-2007, 10:39 AM	#7 (permalink)
MagNet New Member 41 - 2	The crate looks pretty nice but the strap still stands a bit out. Maybe try removing the outline.

06-01-2007, 01:35 PM	#8 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,733 - 429	Okay, cool, I'll desaturate the outline a bit, and see how that looks, can't right now, bit busy with work, but I will later tonight . __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio

17-01-2007, 07:33 AM	#9 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,733 - 429	In-Game/Beauty 112 Triangles Diffuse http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...ion/crated.jpg Normal http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...ion/crateb.jpg Specular http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...ion/crates.jpg Wire http://www.aaronclifford.net/images/...crate_wire.jpg __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio Last edited by Pankake; 21-01-2007 at 05:15 AM.

17-01-2007, 07:37 AM	#10 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,373 - 3,720	nice piece. I haven't seen a crate glow like that IRL, but it looks cool . What engine is that? __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

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