ChosonLord

[Davision]

good model
i think you definately should add more colour...maybe a green would look nice

[requiem2d]

How's this one doing? 1 week should be enough time to get it done

[ChosonLord]

Here is an update, i suck at skinning :\ this is like my first ever gun skin so yeah
I dunno how i should do the skinning, it looks weird

[chris holden]

Appears to be coming along, but this image is just so far away from the weapon that will be so close to the screen. Post up a nice big first persion view.

[ChosonLord]

looks like crap in fps view

[chris holden]

Try adjusting the position to look more like this. Puts it closer to eye position, more visually favorable, and rotated it to show off all the detail in the red arrowed areas

[ChosonLord]

like this:
?

[chris holden]

the new position is closer, but you rotated it the wrong way which hides detail. Rotate the front of the weapon towards the camera so that more of the side is seen.

[ChosonLord]

sorry my bad *red face*
like so: ?

[chris holden]

That's a big improvement, keep tweaking the position until it's perfect.

On the texture, I'd clean it up as much as possible near the back (closest to the camera), removing that big gray scratch and make the diagonal highlight coming off the side/bottom of the scope super clean. You can still dirty/scratch this material up further down the weapon, but keeping it clean close to the camera will hide any pixel depth weirdness.