Competition #15 - giles

[Tiros]

Well, it is kinda cool.. but.. the concept isn't really doing it for me though. Might be a little late for changing it tho.

So, as far as the stuff in the scene goes, add a green background to those leaf-textures to get rid of the white glow around em. Also, you might want to think a bit more about the scale of things, as at the moment there's leaves being gigantic, and planks being almost as thick as a human. Then there's the roots and everything, try to get em at a coherent scale.

If you're trying to do something cartoony and playing a bit with scale.. well.. Then you failed imo, it doesn't really look cartoony, rather it looks wrong

Others might not agree, but that's my opinion.

Try working a bit on these things, and try to improve the materialdefinition a tad, and for the lighting, try adding some sharp & dark shadows

Cheers!

[giles]

Maps in a sec.

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Forgot one map! very basic alpha for the computer.. sry!