Competition #15 - Snipergen

Snipergen · 09-09-2008, 09:46 AM

Allright, I "painted" this idea very quick, nothing very original yet, I know, but I want to study dramatic lighting.
I'm also going to try to tell a story in 1 picture. I'm pretty vague so far sorry

Snipergen · 09-09-2008, 02:51 PM

Did some very basic texturing, only floor is normal and spec mapped, still got to make everything extremely dirty.
Oh and I did a chair too.

Snipergen · 10-09-2008, 02:17 PM

Chair is as good as done, moving on to debris and... a wheelchair!

UnsteadyTeddy · 10-09-2008, 06:52 PM

The "engravements" on the back of the chair look like they use a few unnecessary tris considering it makes very little impact on the silhouette. Also the "bend" in the back legs - you could collapse the ... damn. Just remembered the insane polycount for this comp

weasel.acuh5o · 11-09-2008, 02:04 AM

Teddy's got a point with the detail on the back of the chair and the front legs. I'd consider leaving them in, but making them a bit more obvious through the diffuse map.

Snipergen · 11-09-2008, 08:01 AM

Thx for the comments, but we have to keep in mind that we don't model for the N64 anymore so this is affordable imho, but I should accentuate the shape in the diffuse a bit more I agree.

A new prop. Still gotta tweak the metal on the lock and handle.
512x512 but I only used 60% of that sheet so I have room for more

Snipergen · 11-09-2008, 11:16 AM

God I hate unwrapping but I think this will be my main prop, so I think I should spend more polys on the tires.

Veko · 11-09-2008, 01:44 PM

haha zalig :')

laughing_bun · 11-09-2008, 09:46 PM

I think your chair looks great. i would leave the extra segments the way you have it but maybe define the edges more. a scratch or highlight on the edges would accent the model like your wire frame does. Really putting the extra tris to good use.

UnsteadyTeddy · 12-09-2008, 03:56 AM

Attached a couple of suggestions.

11-09-2008, 02:04 AM	#5 (permalink)
weasel.acuh5o Industry Artist 406 - 1,022	Teddy's got a point with the detail on the back of the chair and the front legs. I'd consider leaving them in, but making them a bit more obvious through the diffuse map. __________________ Supporter of Constructive Criticism

11-09-2008, 08:01 AM	#6 (permalink)
Snipergen Senior Member 379 - 164	Thx for the comments, but we have to keep in mind that we don't model for the N64 anymore so this is affordable imho, but I should accentuate the shape in the diffuse a bit more I agree. A new prop. Still gotta tweak the metal on the lock and handle. 512x512 but I only used 60% of that sheet so I have room for more Last edited by Snipergen; 11-09-2008 at 08:15 AM.

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10-09-2008, 02:17 PM	#3 (permalink)
Snipergen Senior Member 379 - 164	Chair is as good as done, moving on to debris and... a wheelchair!

10-09-2008, 06:52 PM	#4 (permalink)
UnsteadyTeddy Senior Member 459 - 288	The "engravements" on the back of the chair look like they use a few unnecessary tris considering it makes very little impact on the silhouette. Also the "bend" in the back legs - you could collapse the ... damn. Just remembered the insane polycount for this comp

11-09-2008, 11:16 AM	#7 (permalink)
Snipergen Senior Member 379 - 164	God I hate unwrapping but I think this will be my main prop, so I think I should spend more polys on the tires.

11-09-2008, 01:44 PM	#8 (permalink)
Veko New Member 19 - 12	haha zalig :')

11-09-2008, 09:46 PM	#9 (permalink)
laughing_bun Senior Member 374 - 218	I think your chair looks great. i would leave the extra segments the way you have it but maybe define the edges more. a scratch or highlight on the edges would accent the model like your wire frame does. Really putting the extra tris to good use.