Competition #15 - AHashem

[AHashem]

First of all that's really a cool theme, I think there will be alot of interesting enteries. That's my first time to join a low poly competition, hope I get time to finish it. I'll go for a wrecked messy kitchen, there will be alot of props to do here.
Here is my first prop:

[AHashem]

here is an update:

[dafeesh]

Iit went to hell in the kitchen pretty fast there, lol. I really like the chaos. one observation I had was that the cabinet doors and drawer fronts look a little on the thick side. You want them to look to be 0.75" or so in thickness. Keep it up, I'm liking it so far.

[AHashem]

that's todays update, btw I've reached 4k tris:

[UnsteadyTeddy]

Your proportions don't look right.
The cabinets etc should be taller. Not the same height as the table.

EDIT: Like Theo pointed out, windows in kitchens tend to be recessed into the wall, with several windows in them, not just two.

[TheoLogic]

I agree with UnsteadyTeddy. And the window doesn't fit there in that way I think.

[AHashem]

well, I've checked the proportions again and changed the dimensions.



I've decided to switch the locations of the window and the top cabinet as it is more common in these locations.

[UnsteadyTeddy]

The left cabinet looks a bit strange with the shelf bending.

[AHashem]

Render on the previous post updated.

[Javik]

I'm not sure if it's from the angle you're posting the render at but it looks like the chair is too short for the table. Sorry, if you already know this but that was the only real problem I saw.