Competition #14 - primativ

primativ · 15-07-2008, 06:17 PM

This is my first post here, so hi!

Great community you have here.

I have some sketches for the competition and I am having trouble picking the best one to go forward with. I don't want to do something too simular to what has already been started so if you have a favorite let me know, or which one to avoid

A little explanation to the sketches: The 1st is a dobson fly sniper. The 2nd is a wasp commando and a sawfly "larva tank" basicaly. 3rd is a suicide bomber fly and some more wasp sketches. 4th is a dobson fly heavy gunner. 5th is a wasp grunt with a sketch of a possible armored exoskeleton; not sure if that breaks the rules.

Man I am late to this contest, I need to start modeling soon.

Thanks
Primativ

ultra · 16-07-2008, 06:57 AM

Hi! welcome to the boards

I really like the larva concept, i hope u choose that

cheers!

dangermouse · 16-07-2008, 07:50 AM

Hey dude, nice concepts. I avoid concepts, my vision is better than my sketching abilities, but that's no excuse

For me, the (edit- very first drawing), with a rifle, would just be pure awesome. I love his shape, dynamic and powerful. I can just see him in a pose with 3 hands steadying that rifle, standing in the dead center of a war zone, because he's too tough to need cover

I also like the larvae artillery, very creative, but I don't know it will have the same visual impact.

Good luck

primativ · 16-07-2008, 08:03 AM

Thanks for the comments Ultra and Dangermouse!

So thats two for the larva and one for the dobsonfly sniper.

Lets hear from some more I need to get crackin today!

primativ · 16-07-2008, 11:39 AM

I decided that the larva was the strongest sketch and jumped right into modeling. I am already at 900 polys so I have about 100 to go for the face and whatever other details I might add.

primativ · 16-07-2008, 03:03 PM

Added the base colors to it.

primativ · 16-07-2008, 04:29 PM

I wasn't too happy with the ammo pouches so I gave him rocket implants instead.

primativ · 22-07-2008, 03:07 PM

I have started to texture map the bug. I am using a normal, diffuse, and specular map. There are 6 lights in the scene 2 casting shadows.

I am still undecided on an enviroment, any suggestions?

primativ · 23-07-2008, 02:32 PM

Messed with the colors and added some bumps.

primativ · 24-07-2008, 10:20 AM

I changed the guns up a bit, made them skinny and painted the base black to blend into the larva better. I lengthened his hind legs to be more accurate to the reference.

Does this look better than the previous version?

16-07-2008, 06:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
ultra New Member 22 - 36	Hi! welcome to the boards I really like the larva concept, i hope u choose that cheers! __________________ www.FCPORTO.pt

16-07-2008, 08:03 AM	#4 (permalink)
primativ New Member 16 - 13	Thanks for the comments Ultra and Dangermouse! So thats two for the larva and one for the dobsonfly sniper. Lets hear from some more I need to get crackin today! Last edited by primativ; 16-07-2008 at 08:52 AM.

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16-07-2008, 07:50 AM	#3 (permalink)
dangermouse New Member 26 - 21	Hey dude, nice concepts. I avoid concepts, my vision is better than my sketching abilities, but that's no excuse For me, the (edit- very first drawing), with a rifle, would just be pure awesome. I love his shape, dynamic and powerful. I can just see him in a pose with 3 hands steadying that rifle, standing in the dead center of a war zone, because he's too tough to need cover I also like the larvae artillery, very creative, but I don't know it will have the same visual impact. Good luck

16-07-2008, 11:39 AM	#5 (permalink)
primativ New Member 16 - 13	I decided that the larva was the strongest sketch and jumped right into modeling. I am already at 900 polys so I have about 100 to go for the face and whatever other details I might add.

16-07-2008, 03:03 PM	#6 (permalink)
primativ New Member 16 - 13	Added the base colors to it.

16-07-2008, 04:29 PM	#7 (permalink)
primativ New Member 16 - 13	I wasn't too happy with the ammo pouches so I gave him rocket implants instead.

22-07-2008, 03:07 PM	#8 (permalink)
primativ New Member 16 - 13	I have started to texture map the bug. I am using a normal, diffuse, and specular map. There are 6 lights in the scene 2 casting shadows. I am still undecided on an enviroment, any suggestions?

23-07-2008, 02:32 PM	#9 (permalink)
primativ New Member 16 - 13	Messed with the colors and added some bumps.

24-07-2008, 10:20 AM	#10 (permalink)
primativ New Member 16 - 13	I changed the guns up a bit, made them skinny and painted the base black to blend into the larva better. I lengthened his hind legs to be more accurate to the reference. Does this look better than the previous version?