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Old 10-07-2008, 06:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Competition #14 - Avdoot

Concept sheet- low poly competition(Army of small)

Hi all..so finally(n a bit late) i managed to do the concept(based on cricket)..my friend Dev helped me in the concept(Thanks Dev)..
The first two versions are of soldier..but i didnt like it..so i changed it..then i thought of doing the cartoony style and i changed the role to medic in the concept.
The ploy count is a bit low(should be at least 1500 Tris) so i need to design it in a way that i can use the normals wisely..still it seems a bit difficult to do it in 1000 tris..and i decided to make the changes on the fly..
and i am not sure m gonna complete this as the office work is tight scheduled..but i will try..

please do comment on the concept..anything i can add in..because its a cartoon so i need advice..

Thanks..
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Old 10-07-2008, 11:05 AM   #2 (permalink)
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try make some changes to the proportions off the original insect! you know what i mean?!! may be in that way it would looks more cartoony! looking for some cartoony on the web for reff will help! but nice start!
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Old 11-07-2008, 04:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks Syros..
even i was thinking the same but for some reasons i just wanted to hv the actual proportions..but i think to give him a proper cartoony feel i need to change it in the way u described..just a bit off proportion..
what i am thinking is to make his head a bit bigger and add some muscle in the legs..what u think?..also i am thinking about adding a tag line/slogan on the back of the character just below the medic sign..

Thanks again...
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Old 12-07-2008, 05:42 AM   #4 (permalink)
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man i think this would work, but just one offer so far: having that huge injector on his shoulder, i think he should have large muscles over there, and again for walking with that heavy thing, he should have muscles on legs (as you said it yourself), so your character silhouette will looks like something wider at top and bottom, may be it's a good idea to draw some silhouette ! keep it up man, i will start the lowpoly tonight!
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Old 12-07-2008, 05:48 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the concept idea!! Really looking forward to the low poly model
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Old 14-07-2008, 12:01 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks Syros and joukejan..and yes Syros i draw the silhouette again to match up the form a bit..thanks for the comment and ideas guys i really appreciate that...

And my low poly is almost at a finishing stage..will upload the wip and model in a few days..
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